Aloha

Waikiki has no friendly pawn
In a flash all my cash has gone
But its really grand
To lie on the sand
Thinking of you with nothing on . . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 2:04 AM
Aloha got the huh? The rest got the haha! Funny, Aloha Will
Laurie Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 7:28 PM
G'day Rico … I'm chuffed, but you're gunna be disappointed - enjoyed - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 3:13 PM
I'm like Maureen. love it too.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Love it ;D
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