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Aloha

Waikiki has no friendly pawn In a flash all my cash has gone But its really grand To lie on the sand Thinking of you with nothing on . . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/5/2019 2:04:00 AM
Aloha got the huh? The rest got the haha! Funny, Aloha Will
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Date: 4/28/2019 7:28:00 PM
G'day Rico … I'm chuffed, but you're gunna be disappointed - enjoyed - Lindsay
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Date: 4/25/2019 3:13:00 PM
I'm like Maureen. love it too.
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Date: 4/24/2019 9:36:00 PM
Love it ;D
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