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21st June 2023

Pick a Title, Vol.37 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

Is it a reverie or a true slice of life? Have I landed in Arcadia or an earthly paradise? All seems so magical, eyes refusing to believe. Am I dreaming or do I simply fantasize? I see everything clothed in glistening sheen. Around me, all I see is beauty and grandeur. Heaven seems to have come down to earth. The sky and the Earth, draped in great splendour. Covered in a cloak of sparkling dewdrops, The verdant leaves seem studded with emerald gems. Glittering in warm sunshine, they look so gorgeous, Amid them, flowers dance on delicate stems. Bees fly humming in subdued tone, Teasing even the weeds that wear a flower. The bunnies feeling the breath of May, Nibble at tender grass, so eager it to devour. All about me is liquid silver’s dazzling glow, With eddy swirls and falling beams. Above me is the vast panorama of the sky, With chiffon clouds straying far into the seams. The boughs of trees droop with blossom’s weight Leaves tremble in the might of passing gales. Tickling rills and somersaulting cataracts Give a heavenly dimension to half lit vales. The meadows are dotted with violets and bluebells. Also, clusters of flowers that never seem to fade. Lovely birds are heard singing from every bush and tree. Golden sunbeams play, filtering through the shade. No doubt, this place is closer to Coleridge’s Xanadu Far off from world’s sick hurry, this seems a heavenly sphere. Anyone who lands in this ‘Elysian Field' will loudly exclaim, ‘If there is a Paradise on Earth. it’s here, it’s here’!

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Date: 8/1/2023 12:57:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, this is magic in a poetic bottle! So wonderfully composed with a feast of vibrant images for the soul! I am packing my bag and buying a ticket to your enchanted land of beauty and grace. Well, even if I can't literally do that, I can visit your Xanadu any time as I fav your beauty in words. Blessings dear friend. Let's meet for tea in your Xanadu!
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Date: 7/22/2023 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations Valsa on your win with such a wonderful poem.
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Date: 7/22/2023 6:21:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant poem, Valsa:-) I absolutely loved it!
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Date: 7/22/2023 6:02:00 AM
It's, indeed, a clear depiction of Xanadu. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/21/2023 6:34:00 PM
When you've reached Xana -- Please du!
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Date: 6/21/2023 11:59:00 AM
I am glad you found almost Xanadu with beautiful visions.
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Date: 6/21/2023 8:57:00 AM
All the lovely imagery…your Xanadu words buzz about us.
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Date: 6/21/2023 5:34:00 AM
I see everything clothed in glistening sheen. Around me, all I see is beauty and grandeur---a perfect place to be--a paradise! Your creative spirits flow throughout this beautiful poem, Valsa.
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Date: 6/20/2023 10:26:00 PM
What a brilliant description. It brings to mind the Garden of Eden. No one can enter. An angel with a flaming sword guards the place. But oh how I wish for a few moments there. Lovely description, dear Valsa.
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