Almost Heaven, West Virginia

majestic mountains
fog hovering in the morn
unsullied waters
hasten to the waterfall
filling the cold deep basin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Comporozos Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 5:54 AM
Refreshing and beautiful as your tanka
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 9:58 PM
Love how you ended it with the cold deep basin. You did the song title justice!
Henderson Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 5:52 PM
Those mountains are truly a gift from heaven Victoria. Peace and blessings to you.
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