Almost Guilty

Occasionally I cry,
Overwhelming joy, 
Sadness is deprived
Seems Surreal
I found the real deal,
I feel almost guilty
Like it's a steal
Must have been a saint in a past life,
I'll soon be lucky enough to be his wife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Palmer Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 7:27 AM
lovely write of love Sharon,wedding invitation wife to be lol
Dolly Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 7:32 AM
thanks for reading my stuff:))
Guzzi Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 5:28 PM
Your form is Rhyme since most of your lines end in a word which rhymes with a line above surreal/deal/steal & life/wife. You could also [when in doubt use the form category Verse. Welcome to Soup Light & Love
Dolly Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 7:24 PM
Thank you:)
Johnson Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Seems you need a lawyer to seal the deal. Put it all in writing and spin the blissful wheel. Let emotions have their way. And gratitude begin the day.
Dolly Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 4:09 PM
Thanks for reading!
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