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Almost Gone Forever

Almost Gone Forever


I thought she was secure inside her cage,
     as I departed from the shelter and
was walking the short block back to my car,
     when all at once the door flung wide and she

jumped to the sidewalk, scampering away!
     I rain so quickly, but she disappeared
right near the curb into a storm drain there;
     my heart was broken...suddenly, she's gone.

Some passersby had heard my anguished sobs,
     as helplessness took hold with no way out. 
Quick on my knees, I vainly called her name
     not even knowing how far down she was.

Poor thing was orphaned, never had a home,
     and I had fallen for her big green eyes
and soft, full fur of charcoal gray and white,
     well-patterned...such a lovely tabby cat.

A firehouse was right across the street,
     and suddenly two men were at my side.
They quickly knelt to lift the iron grate;
     one laying on his stomach pulled her out.

So much had happened in so short a time...
     I found a dear, sweet kitty to bring home,
then lost her in a storm drain down the street...
     a fireman rescued her...and my sad heart.


March 6, 2019

Contest: Down A Storm Drain - Gone Forever
Sponsor: Eve Roper

Fiction For Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/23/2019 2:46:00 AM
Hi Sandra, A very beautiful poem and so heartfelt - you truly deserved this win - congratulations. Poetry hugs,, Jennifer.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/31/2019 8:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jennifer, for your very supportive, uplifting comments and congrats! I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/22/2019 7:06:00 PM
the imagery is so realistic, is it a true story sandra? many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/22/2019 10:41:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for the uplifting comment and congrats. No, my poem is not based on a true story...completely made up, but I do know that firefighters often do rescue animals. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/22/2019 4:12:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for entering my contest. This was such a cute story ,you had clear and fascinating imagery and great rhythm and flow. Congratulations on your win. Come and visit me on my blog https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=35331&PoetID=57242
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/22/2019 10:43:00 PM
Thank you for the delightful contest theme and for my nice placement, Eve. I enjoyed writing this, and I am pleased that you liked it. Hugs, Sandra
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