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Almost Dusk

Almost dusk - half asleep, half a word in reply,
Someone under her breath utters almost a No,
Bodies close, with her arm half-way frozen in flight…
Yet, that damn half a feeling means "no place to go".

This is when for the feeling of fullness I yearn,
This is when I so dream of the Yen to my Yin…
And I slowly dive into darkness that burns,
And your Yes is exhaled on one breath, from within…

December 1976

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Skat A

Date: 8/17/2013 11:12:00 PM

CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:29:00 PM

Hi Roman, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/11/2013 2:58:00 AM

Hi Roman, the yen to my yin, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2013 2:37:00 PM

Hello new member Roman !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/10/2013 11:10:00 AM

hello Roman, my favorite line " I slowly dive into the darkness that burns" deep and takes from the soul. love the write-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@. ...