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In the war of words count the cost all is fair in love maybe but not war hearts mend but dead bodies wash ashore they will war no more being dead war is not hell tragic but enough said love is the fairest lest you be a whore In the war of words
You know better than being lost unsatisfied but a chance for more the love of money rotten to the core war is cold far as I know and so is frost In the war of words

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Date: 1/4/2017 7:57:00 AM
Just a so cool poem, John. Wow! The fragmented structuring is so creative, to me it symbolizes a broken relationship. Don't know if that was how you wanted it to appear as, but Anywho ... this is one fantastic and creative poem w/a real meaningful message. Hats off to you. Going in my fave. Will anxiously look forward to reading more of your work. Happy New Year. May love light your path always. Romantic Warrior
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