Almost Counts

In the war of words count the cost                                                                                                                                                   all is fair in love maybe but not war                                                                                                                         hearts mend but dead bodies wash ashore                                                                                                                    they will war no more being dead                                                                                                                                     war is not hell tragic but enough said                                                                                                                                      love is the fairest lest you be a whore                                                                                                                                 In the war of words       
You know better than being lost unsatisfied but a chance for more the love of money rotten to the core war is cold far as I know and so is frost In the war of words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 4, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Just a so cool poem, John. Wow! The fragmented structuring is so creative, to me it symbolizes a broken relationship. Don't know if that was how you wanted it to appear as, but Anywho ... this is one fantastic and creative poem w/a real meaningful message. Hats off to you. Going in my fave. Will anxiously look forward to reading more of your work. Happy New Year. May love light your path always. Romantic Warrior
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