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Almost Broke Jack's Crown

What kooky weather, hails belting down A spectacular display, it pummelling our town It's supposed to be spring Must be winter's last fling Sure not appreciated, almost broke Jack's crown © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 4/23/2015 11:02:00 PM
Hail is exciting!! I've only been in hail once. Hope you're okay!! Be safe and stay cozy Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/24/2015 6:22:00 AM
EXCITING!!! But this is the end of April... wot!!! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 4/23/2015 1:07:00 PM
Jack be nimble... Jack be quick... but chasing a chick on ice... Is not a good trick... After all, silly bear, ice is inveriably slick...
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Date: 4/23/2015 2:50:00 PM
Aha! Jack be nimble... it's been ages since Jack was nimble! LOL xxx
Date: 4/22/2015 7:29:00 PM
Be careful out there young man.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/22/2015 8:06:00 PM
Hmmm! This YOUNG man thanks you for your concern! LOL

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