Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Almost Broke Jack's Crown

What kooky weather, hails belting down
A spectacular display, it pummelling our town
It's supposed to be spring
Must be winter's last fling
Sure not appreciated, almost broke Jack's crown


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal April 23, 2015 at 11:02 PM Hail is exciting!! I've only been in hail once. Hope you're okay!! Be safe and stay cozy Always, Laura Jack Ellison April 24, 2015 at 6:22 AM EXCITING!!! But this is the end of April... wot!!! Love, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman April 23, 2015 at 1:07 PM Jack be nimble... Jack be quick... but chasing a chick on ice... Is not a good trick... After all, silly bear, ice is inveriably slick... Jack Ellison April 23, 2015 at 2:50 PM Aha! Jack be nimble... it's been ages since Jack was nimble! LOL xxx

Tim Smith April 22, 2015 at 7:29 PM Be careful out there young man. Jack Ellison April 22, 2015 at 8:06 PM Hmmm! This YOUNG man thanks you for your concern! LOL