Get Your Premium Membership

Almost Absent of Character Creases

Sometimes while laughing I wonder tis not because it's not humor and I ask sought I don't view it was meant for us to cry maybe we wouldn't snicker either nigh Perhaps the models spot something we don't premature wrinkles isn't the truth tone I rarely do smile when pictures are made they are always forced and turned to a fade Though with this I'm not too serious worn I pretend posed since the day I was born my lack of expression serves me as thus I wouldn't have one if hit by a bus It's true I've changed photos as to often on my profile soup page I hope soften

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/21/2020 6:07:00 AM
I too have never been one to find pleasure in having photos taken! I often wonder if pictures of smiling people are a cover for unseen painful feelings! ~ Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Crabtree Avatar
Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/21/2020 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 10/29/2020 4:57:00 AM
I like this one, but I must warn you that you look about 13 years old now. So if looking young and beautiful is your goal, great job! Photographs are so tricky!
Login to Reply
Crabtree Avatar
Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/29/2020 4:31:00 PM
Thanks Caren. Younger is good, but not 13.
Date: 10/29/2020 4:34:00 AM
Fake smiles don't look good--well said, Angela.
Login to Reply
Crabtree Avatar
Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/29/2020 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Vijay. I can usually spot them right off.
Date: 10/28/2020 11:49:00 PM
So you changed your avatar? I wouldn't have noticed. I'm heading towards senility. With all the medications I take, It's no wonder. However I try to judge by the poem only and your sonnet is so well done. It's been ages since I wrote one. ~~
Login to Reply
Crabtree Avatar
Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/29/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. You''re far away from being senile :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things