Almost a Very Good Year

It was the year of the dark yellow moon
When the cold winds came
And the oceans turned green
Before running out from shore

It was the dawdling year 
A year sadness fell from our eyes
Like an eruption of hammering storms 
The type we kept in the gardens
Just around the block
By the Stop and Shop

It was the year the dog died
The year we placed him on a board
And all the children wore black
Carrying him home
Like a soldier returning from war

It was the year you packed my lunch
Sending me off to work
Wearing your I've got a secret smile
And that new dress you bought on Monday
That flowed about you like a cloud

It was the year I came home
Only to find you had gone
Leaving nothing but the rains 
And a note that said
It was almost a very good year
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Macmillan Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 7:37 PM
Hey, loved this one, CJ. Chiling, biting and all of that, but much to like: oceans turned green (good allusion to jealousy), leaving nothing but the rains (perfect). Though I enjoyed your last line, and I'm not sure if I SHOULD mention this but I will, I mentally added, "But, my dear,/ not only the dog is dead." I enjoy reading whatever you write. Keep posting! Cyndi
Krieger Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Tnank you Cindi for those kind words... all my best, CJ
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning CJ. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Krieger Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 6:42 AM
Love your comments Carol.. Peace, CJ
Babcock Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 3:42 PM
I guess we all have years that are either good or bad. I like this poem because I know the feelings you are trying to convey. God Bless Phyl
Krieger Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 6:41 AM
Thanks for the kind comment Phyllis.. God Bless you too, CJ
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