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almost

an almost autumn
scene unfolds outside window....
purple flowers bloom
yellow butterflies flit fast
mexican petunias wave   

occasionally birds
come into view and hummers....
brown rabbit nibbles plants
a break in the fence somewhere
small animals enter there

summer swiftly flies
soon cooler nights, drier air....
hummers migrate south
mexican petunias die
birds at feeders seen outside  

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Sotto Poet Date: 8/29/2025 12:43:00 PM Delightful harmonies and vibrant colors, a cherished pleasure, a fave dear Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/29/2025 4:54:00 PM Why, thank you, Lasaad. I am honored you would fav it. I appreciate the visit and kind review. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/28/2025 8:07:00 AM Great job. Is it for the series challenge. I see the middle one is missing a line. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/28/2025 10:18:00 AM Thanks, Andrea. I corrected it. Sara

Yann Rolland Date: 8/27/2025 6:25:00 PM delicious sonorities and colors, a favorite, thanks poet Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/28/2025 4:48:00 AM I am honored that you would fav it. I appreciate your visit, Yann. Life offers so much for us to see and enjoy if only we look and listen. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/27/2025 5:59:00 PM autumn's breath just recently arrived and, like you, I notice all the little changes occuring, especially in our flower beds. A beautiful read! have a great evening, Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/28/2025 4:45:00 AM Why, thank you, Sara B. I hope it doesn't get back as hot as it was during July and early August. I do enjoy the cooler weather and much cooler nights. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/27/2025 1:15:00 PM - We already have the breath of autumn ... the trees have started to change color ... - A beautiful poem, Sara :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/27/2025 2:44:00 PM How awesome, Anne-Lise. It has been a little cooler and the humidity is a little lower for a couple of days and thank God for the cooler air. This summer has been hard on me. Thank you for the visit and nice comments. Sara K

James Peranteau Date: 8/27/2025 12:30:00 PM the irony dear poet, I stumbling cross your beautiful write here; I just finished a video on edible plants and roots in the wild...exspecially around me ")...ty....much love Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/27/2025 2:42:00 PM James, some plants are edible, some taste good, but some are very dangerous. Some are medicinal in nature and have to be used carefully. Study them, compare two that look alike and be very watchful. I have studied them some, but I would not feel comfortable actually using them because I might have made a mistake in their identity. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Sara K