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Almighty Lord God

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Author's Notes: This is a "Tanka" or a Japanese verse form write on the subject of "Almighty Lord God." I chose this subject for this write in counter-distinction to a Tanka I posted on June 5th on "Lucifer." I don't believe I need a lengthy note at all to explain the supreme role and importance of God in our respective lives. (Gary Bateman - June 26, 2015) (Tanka)

Categories: allegory, blessing, dedication, god, heaven, introspection, and judgement.

Syllable Grouping: 5-7-5-7-7 = 31 Syllables; Total Lines (Verses) = 5; Total Words = 16.

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Almighty Lord God Heavenly Master— Always omnipotent, yes! Our Lord God is Love . . . Always omnipresent, yes! Eternity’s Divine Force! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, June 26, 2015 (Tanka)

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 7:14:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/10/2015 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Funom!! Glad you liked my Tanka here!! Best Wishes, Gary

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2015 3:19:00 PM

great idea for tanka!! One to praise the Lord with.

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/6/2015 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!! Glad you liked this Tanka. Cheers, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/3/2015 6:43:00 PM

Hi G! Excellent pen Gary! Very beautifully written tanka my dear friend.You've said it perfectly,G. I enjoyed it!A 7+ and a fav!Golden pen!Thank you again for visiting my page.I appreciate it a lot, G.Sending love n' prayers to you and Ingrid.I wish you a very happy 4th of July too!:)Best to you in everything always!Wishing you both a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you! D.

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/4/2015 1:17:00 AM

Thanks "D"!! Our continuing best wishes to you too and for the 4th of July weekend!! Glad you liked this Tanka. Best Always, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/29/2015 8:06:00 AM

Today.. always and forever--- no other than God! amen. @ GAry~Olive Eloisa=)

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/29/2015 6:51:00 PM

Hello Olive Eloisa!! Thank for your read and most wonderful comment dear one. Best Always, Gary

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/26/2015 2:16:00 PM

Gary, I enjoyed this piece. Nice description in these 5 powerful lines:) Alexis

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/29/2015 6:50:00 PM

Thanks Alexis!! Glad you like my Tanka here. (Just now replying here late today.) I will be by to check out your poetry too. Feel free to read any of my poems as you wish!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2015 11:21:00 AM

- Beautiful - ........ feel silence .... word of power - (t.r.) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/26/2015 11:30:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise!! Your comments say everything!! Have a great evening. Cheers, Gary

Diane Christian

Date: 6/26/2015 10:04:00 AM

Lovely poem, for the one who is and was and is to come Amen he is everywhere all the time,

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/26/2015 11:32:00 AM

Hello Diane!! You are precisely right. For the Almighty is with us all the time and everywhere. Best Wishes, Gary