Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes: This is a "Tanka" or a Japanese verse form write on the subject of "Almighty Lord God." I chose this subject for this write in counter-distinction to a Tanka I posted on June 5th on "Lucifer." I don't believe I need a lengthy note at all to explain the supreme role and importance of God in our respective lives. (Gary Bateman - June 26, 2015) (Tanka)  

Categories:  allegory, blessing, dedication, god, heaven, introspection, and judgement.

Syllable Grouping:  5-7-5-7-7 = 31 Syllables; Total Lines (Verses) = 5; Total Words = 16. 

("How Many Syllables Counter" was used for syllable confirmation for both automated and manual syllable counts and cross-check.)

Almighty Lord God

Almighty Lord God

Heavenly Master—
Always omnipotent, yes!
Our Lord God is Love . . . 
	Always omnipresent, yes! 
Eternity’s Divine Force!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, 
June 26, 2015 (Tanka)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 7:14 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
Bateman Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Thanks Funom!! Glad you liked my Tanka here!! Best Wishes, Gary
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 3:19 PM
great idea for tanka!! One to praise the Lord with.
Bateman Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Thanks Andrea!! Glad you liked this Tanka. Cheers, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:43 PM
Hi G! Excellent pen Gary! Very beautifully written tanka my dear friend.You've said it perfectly,G. I enjoyed it!A 7+ and a fav!Golden pen!Thank you again for visiting my page.I appreciate it a lot, G.Sending love n' prayers to you and Ingrid.I wish you a very happy 4th of July too!:)Best to you in everything always!Wishing you both a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you! D.
Bateman Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 1:17 AM
Thanks "D"!! Our continuing best wishes to you too and for the 4th of July weekend!! Glad you liked this Tanka. Best Always, Gary
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Today.. always and forever--- no other than God! amen. @ GAry~Olive Eloisa=)
Bateman Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Hello Olive Eloisa!! Thank for your read and most wonderful comment dear one. Best Always, Gary
Y. Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Gary, I enjoyed this piece. Nice description in these 5 powerful lines:) Alexis
Bateman Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Thanks Alexis!! Glad you like my Tanka here. (Just now replying here late today.) I will be by to check out your poetry too. Feel free to read any of my poems as you wish!! Best Always, Gary
Andresen Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 11:21 AM
- Beautiful - ........ feel silence .... word of power - (t.r.) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise!! Your comments say everything!! Have a great evening. Cheers, Gary
Christian Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Lovely poem, for the one who is and was and is to come Amen he is everywhere all the time,
Bateman Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Hello Diane!! You are precisely right. For the Almighty is with us all the time and everywhere. Best Wishes, Gary
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