Rama Balasubramanian Poet Verse

Alluring Daybreak

Blooms pink
How beautiful
I think

Calm lake
Alluring at 
daybreak

Lone Duck
I am simply
awestruck

02.04.2021
Contest Name - Finding Your Musette 
Sponsor	- Joseph May
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Kim Merryman April 26, 2021 at 1:03 PM Nicely done, Rama! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Rama Balasubramanian April 27, 2021 at 9:50 AM Thanks Kim. Take care, Rama

Alexis Y. April 25, 2021 at 12:06 PM Hi Rama, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis Rama Balasubramanian April 26, 2021 at 4:57 AM Thanks for taking time out and reading and commenting. Congratulations to you too. Take care, God bless! Rama

Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2021 at 9:52 AM Congratulations on your win. I wish, I was under your tree by the water. A wonderful picture for a beautiful write. Have a blessed day............ Rama Balasubramanian April 26, 2021 at 4:56 AM Thanks for taking time out and reading and commenting. Congratulations to you too. Take care, God bless! Rama

Joseph May April 24, 2021 at 9:02 AM Very nicely penned Rama, Congrats on your win Rama Balasubramanian April 24, 2021 at 11:23 AM Thanks for the placement and for teaching a new poetic form. God bless! Take care, Rama

Krish Radhakrishna April 2, 2021 at 10:21 AM This is excellent! Very well done! a sure winner! all the best in the contest! Rama Balasubramanian April 2, 2021 at 10:36 AM Thanks. Take care, Rama

Michelle Faulkner April 2, 2021 at 7:43 AM Very tranquil, I especially like the 'lone duck' lines - good luck in the contest~ Rama Balasubramanian April 2, 2021 at 7:47 AM Thanks for the wonderful comments. Take care, Rama