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One or more verses with a rhyme scheme of "abba" (that is, where the first and fourth lines and the second and third lines rhyme).

The Sea summons sailors, sending waves lapping at curiosity's shores. And offers a world without locked doors, safekeeping treasures and salty graves. And though oft as gentle as the breeze rippling across Her watery face. This lady of adventure and grace, is known to be a fair-weather tease. On calm nights when not riled by the wind; She reflects the moon like a mirror. And brings a canvas of stars nearer, upon which a lover's hopes get pinned. She shifts colors from aquamarine to turquoise, chartreuse, and indigo. And unleashes wonderment and woe, not hell or heaven, but in-between. Many feel the allure of the Sea as She tugs upon their hearts and souls. For, from Her depths to Her shallow shoals, She exerts a sensuality.

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Date: 8/27/2021 6:12:00 AM
Emile, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas, I love the image ~peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 8/27/2021 6:29:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate your comments and the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/25/2021 10:48:00 PM
Nice one Emily....Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/26/2021 7:18:00 AM
Thanks, Carol, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/25/2021 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your top win. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/25/2021 5:25:00 PM
Thanks, Gina, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2021 2:10:00 PM
We are all eventually, called back to the sea, the source of all life. Nicely said.
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Date: 8/21/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, DM, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2021 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Lovely imagery and beautifully described the depth of the sea... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 8/21/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Supraja, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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