All's Good

Two in love call it a gift.
A love that knows no end.
In safe space, it will have no rift.
Faithfully, they each have a friend.

(a nicer poem)
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Gifford Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 1:20 AM
A dream come true. Wonderfully said, my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 8:26 AM
Thanks for your comment.
George Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 8:52 PM
A sweet and lovely little poem. When two people are in love and when there is no end to their love, it is heaven! Have a great weekend, Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:17 PM
Thank you.
Buehler Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 10:23 PM
So nice to read this lovely poem, Hilda. Thank you for sharing. :)
Greenhough Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 10:29 PM
Thank you for reading. I'm sending sunshine to you.
Romios Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 11:36 AM
I love, love that feeling of being in a safe space, It is being accepted for who you are and who you are in love. Perfect. Moreover, it does not have to be in the love relationship. It can exist in a Phenomenal friendship.as well. Hugs, Pangie xx
Greenhough Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Yes, you put it into sensible words. Trust takes time. Friends last a long time.
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Sweet words, sweet lines, Hilda! :) gw
Greenhough Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 4:34 PM
I hope you like it.
Empress Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 4:12 AM
True and so well written dear hilda, ive missed reading your poems, and you do them so well, in few words youv delivered such a powerful one that hits the soul so eloquently! Love when shared sincerely is a blessing altho sometimes its hard to see, last long. Pleasure always reading you. Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thank you for reading it. There is a second stanza to this poem that I decided to remove for PS. It is now pretty short but is sweet.
M  Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 2:49 PM
So sweet Hilda! Debx
Greenhough Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 3:22 PM
Good wishes.
May Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Wonderful verse, best wishes
Greenhough Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:52 AM
A wink, skip, and hop. Thank you.
Schatz Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 10:26 PM
Awww... That's sweet Hilda
Greenhough Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:52 AM
Thank you for following.
Hind Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Sorry about your fustration. Maybe love will come when you're not expecting it....
Greenhough Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Not frustrated, I'm in a good place. I love romance stories. I'm a happy person when you're a happy person. Best wishes. May all your dreams come true.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 7:51 AM
Seems you lost faith in falling in love. Love lost is always popular.
Greenhough Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Thank you for your comment. Every person stands under his own star. I count my blessings.
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