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Allow Me To Dream Your Dreams

Allow me ~ to be your dream of dawning
When song of love the robins are singing
While rustles of trees whisper to soft winds
And golden morning is rising ebulliently
Etching purple skyline tinged in amethyst
As halo of its luminance is glinting the sea,
Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams.

Allow me~ to be the guide of your journey
While despaired emotions come dreading
From forgotten yore of discarded memories
And hope that once was, starts hesitating
In aches of today and tomorrow’s warning
Reluctant to traverse the path of destiny,
Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams.

Allow me~ in longings of intimate musings
When you are reveling in alluring fantasies
Buoying passions romantic on magical wings
While stars of night are zealously twinkling
And crystalline skies are gleaming moonlit
Allow me~ to be the Venus of your galaxy,
Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams.

Allow me~ to be the pulse of your heartbeats
Strumming lovingly the sound of their music,
Allow me, my love, to be voice of your lyrics
In feelings of ecstasy crooning tunes euphoric
Lounging by your side in paradise heavenly,
Allow me~ the opulence of just you and me,
Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams.

May 12, 2021
Say it again poetry contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Valsa George Date: 2/18/2022 7:10:00 PM Reading this , I feel being buoyed up on magical wings ! Absolutely brilliant ,,,, gifted writer ! Login to Reply

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 5/19/2021 10:45:00 AM Vijayji this is SO beautiful... 'Allow me to dream your dreams... '... so romantic a verse... Big congrats on your win... God bless.. ~ Ani Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 5/18/2021 4:49:00 AM Exceptional with a capital E, Vijay. Absolutely delightful to read. Your poetry is always on point! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 5/16/2021 4:42:00 PM WoW! Vijay, Your imagery is stunning and spectacular! I enjoyed each stanza. Great title and content. Congrats in advance. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/17/2021 2:10:00 PM Thank you for your kind remarks my friend. Much appreciate, as always.

Charlie Smith Date: 5/16/2021 8:06:00 AM Wonderful imagery, as usual Vijay, congratulations... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/17/2021 2:09:00 PM Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex Date: 5/15/2021 10:27:00 PM Congratulations! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/17/2021 2:09:00 PM Thank you.

Hilo Poet Date: 5/15/2021 7:11:00 PM Vijay, you appropriated words that raised your poem to a greater romantic measure. Didn't know that repeating word(s) was to be the most challenging but you gave it an art. Kudos my friend for your worthy win, Aloha! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/17/2021 2:09:00 PM Thank you William for your kind remarks and thank you for holding contests. Much appreciate.

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/15/2021 6:23:00 PM WOW! Vijay, so lyrical, so musical! Love the imageries and the beautiful words singing the songs of heart, and dream the dreams! To my faves. Best wishes ~ Mala Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/17/2021 2:08:00 PM So special to receive a FAVE from you, Mala. Much joy in reading your comments. Many thanks.

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 5/15/2021 1:22:00 PM Such great imagery displayed here Vijay, your title is really appealing too. Blessings, Gordon Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/15/2021 3:06:00 PM Much appreciate Gordon your visit and comments--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/15/2021 7:47:00 AM Oh! I see a definite top winner here, Vijay, this is a dream one for sure:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/15/2021 3:05:00 PM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex Date: 5/14/2021 1:44:00 PM It's a beautifully written poem. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/15/2021 5:49:00 AM Thank you Alex--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/14/2021 12:46:00 PM There is no way she could refuse Vijay, a well written verse that im sure will do we in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 5/14/2021 1:07:00 PM What they call a staycation, a holiday in the uk, we were in the new forest. Vijay Pandit Date: 5/14/2021 12:58:00 PM Thank you Tom--much appreciate as always. Were you away on a short vacation to one of your many destinations?

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/14/2021 8:18:00 AM Please, dream my dreams for me. There is such beauty in your poem, Vijay, that it makes me long for a loving partner. Lovely work, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/14/2021 12:46:00 PM So very kind of you to say so my friend. Much appreciate Carolyn. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman Date: 5/13/2021 9:47:00 PM Allow me:-- to read this wonderful gem of poetry.... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/14/2021 5:54:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comments Harry--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/13/2021 12:15:00 PM wow, did this get the honors Supraja mentioned below? I agree it would be deserving of them. Beautiful! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2021 2:26:00 PM Of course not Andrea. Just her way of expressing support. Many thanks for your comments, Andrea--much appreciate.

Supraja Kannan Date: 5/13/2021 6:54:00 AM Such a stunning romantic verse... Loved each and every line... This is gonna be a winner for sure and gonna get the POTD, POTW and POTY honors... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2021 8:35:00 AM So very kind of you Supraja, to say so. Much appreciate your visit and cheerful remarks. Glad you liked the poem. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile Date: 5/13/2021 4:44:00 AM Your romantic lines are blessed with such lovely and appealing imagery while fully expressing your yearning and desire. Excellent as usual Vijay! Good Luck !! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2021 4:55:00 AM Glad you stopped by Mike, with your delightful feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/12/2021 11:08:00 PM A dreamy nebula of so many enticing thoughts, where everything is fantastic. You go from fantasy to wordily imagery, sounds of music and mesmerizing sounds. A top placing. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2021 4:53:00 AM Thank you for the vote of confidence, Victor--so special coming from you. Much appreciate, as always--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 5/12/2021 7:52:00 PM "Allow me~ to dream your dreams" Oh my ! This is so beautiful and romantic. To be.. the *dawning, the sea, lyrics and heartbeats* Everything in-between. So dreamy indeed. Tender and breathtaking. Your words take me to the stars. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2021 4:52:00 AM Thank you my friend for your cheerful comments. Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 5/12/2021 3:16:00 PM With poetry such as this, I think you hold the skeletal key to open many a heart and imagination. Thankyou for sharing Vijay, sending synergy and good vibes your way :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2021 3:24:00 PM Always an honor when you visit. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Vienna. Many thanks.

Hello There Date: 5/12/2021 12:49:00 PM Allow me to finally appear on your page, though I've always loved and appreciated your works. Sorry it has been so long. This poem is enchanting, Vijay. I don't know what else to say. A fave for sure. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2021 3:23:00 PM Pleasure is all mine to welcome you my friend. I am thrilled that you graced my page with your presence and delightful remarks. Much appreciate, HT--many many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/12/2021 7:42:00 AM A song of the heart composed by love and offered to the world as poetic rapture! Superbly written , my dearest friend, Vijay. May your poem be well received and placed among the winners where it belongs. Blessings ! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2021 3:21:00 PM Song of the heart it is my friend. Much appreciate your lovely comments, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/12/2021 6:18:00 AM This is absolutely beautiful. You are so talented Vijay. Your poetry takes me to nice places, always. I love the line out of so many nice ones...Etching purple skyline tinged in amethyst. :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2021 3:20:00 PM So nice to hear, Heidi. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Glad you liked the poem. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/12/2021 5:33:00 AM - You have so many beautiful poems, Vijay ... this is one of the most beautiful I have read ... Congratulations .... I bend in the dust of admiration - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2021 3:19:00 PM So very kind of you to say so, Anne-Lise. It is a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate--many thanks.