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Allow Me To Dream Your Dreams

Allow me ~ to be your dream of dawning When song of love the robins are singing While rustles of trees whisper to soft winds And golden morning is rising ebulliently Etching purple skyline tinged in amethyst As halo of its luminance is glinting the sea, Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams. Allow me~ to be the guide of your journey While despaired emotions come dreading From forgotten yore of discarded memories And hope that once was, starts hesitating In aches of today and tomorrow’s warning Reluctant to traverse the path of destiny, Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams. Allow me~ in longings of intimate musings When you are reveling in alluring fantasies Buoying passions romantic on magical wings While stars of night are zealously twinkling And crystalline skies are gleaming moonlit Allow me~ to be the Venus of your galaxy, Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams. Allow me~ to be the pulse of your heartbeats Strumming lovingly the sound of their music, Allow me, my love, to be voice of your lyrics In feelings of ecstasy crooning tunes euphoric Lounging by your side in paradise heavenly, Allow me~ the opulence of just you and me, Allow me~ my dear~ to dream your dreams. May 12, 2021 Say it again poetry contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Valsa George

Date: 2/18/2022 7:10:00 PM

Reading this , I feel being buoyed up on magical wings ! Absolutely brilliant ,,,, gifted writer !

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/19/2021 10:45:00 AM

Vijayji this is SO beautiful... 'Allow me to dream your dreams... '... so romantic a verse... Big congrats on your win... God bless.. ~ Ani

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/18/2021 4:49:00 AM

Exceptional with a capital E, Vijay. Absolutely delightful to read. Your poetry is always on point!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/16/2021 4:42:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, Your imagery is stunning and spectacular! I enjoyed each stanza. Great title and content. Congrats in advance. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:10:00 PM

Thank you for your kind remarks my friend. Much appreciate, as always.

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/16/2021 8:06:00 AM

Wonderful imagery, as usual Vijay, congratulations...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/15/2021 10:27:00 PM

Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:09:00 PM

Thank you.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/15/2021 7:11:00 PM

Vijay, you appropriated words that raised your poem to a greater romantic measure. Didn't know that repeating word(s) was to be the most challenging but you gave it an art. Kudos my friend for your worthy win, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:09:00 PM

Thank you William for your kind remarks and thank you for holding contests. Much appreciate.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/15/2021 6:23:00 PM

WOW! Vijay, so lyrical, so musical! Love the imageries and the beautiful words singing the songs of heart, and dream the dreams! To my faves. Best wishes ~ Mala

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:08:00 PM

So special to receive a FAVE from you, Mala. Much joy in reading your comments. Many thanks.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/15/2021 1:22:00 PM

Such great imagery displayed here Vijay, your title is really appealing too. Blessings, Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/15/2021 3:06:00 PM

Much appreciate Gordon your visit and comments--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/15/2021 7:47:00 AM

Oh! I see a definite top winner here, Vijay, this is a dream one for sure:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/15/2021 3:05:00 PM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/14/2021 1:44:00 PM

It's a beautifully written poem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/15/2021 5:49:00 AM

Thank you Alex--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2021 12:46:00 PM

There is no way she could refuse Vijay, a well written verse that im sure will do we in the contest. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/14/2021 1:07:00 PM

What they call a staycation, a holiday in the uk, we were in the new forest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2021 12:58:00 PM

Thank you Tom--much appreciate as always. Were you away on a short vacation to one of your many destinations?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2021 8:18:00 AM

Please, dream my dreams for me. There is such beauty in your poem, Vijay, that it makes me long for a loving partner. Lovely work, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2021 12:46:00 PM

So very kind of you to say so my friend. Much appreciate Carolyn. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/13/2021 9:47:00 PM

Allow me:-- to read this wonderful gem of poetry....

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2021 5:54:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comments Harry--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2021 12:15:00 PM

wow, did this get the honors Supraja mentioned below? I agree it would be deserving of them. Beautiful!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2021 2:26:00 PM

Of course not Andrea. Just her way of expressing support. Many thanks for your comments, Andrea--much appreciate.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/13/2021 6:54:00 AM

Such a stunning romantic verse... Loved each and every line... This is gonna be a winner for sure and gonna get the POTD, POTW and POTY honors...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2021 8:35:00 AM

So very kind of you Supraja, to say so. Much appreciate your visit and cheerful remarks. Glad you liked the poem. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/13/2021 4:44:00 AM

Your romantic lines are blessed with such lovely and appealing imagery while fully expressing your yearning and desire. Excellent as usual Vijay! Good Luck !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2021 4:55:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Mike, with your delightful feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/12/2021 11:08:00 PM

A dreamy nebula of so many enticing thoughts, where everything is fantastic. You go from fantasy to wordily imagery, sounds of music and mesmerizing sounds. A top placing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2021 4:53:00 AM

Thank you for the vote of confidence, Victor--so special coming from you. Much appreciate, as always--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/12/2021 7:52:00 PM

"Allow me~ to dream your dreams" Oh my ! This is so beautiful and romantic. To be.. the *dawning, the sea, lyrics and heartbeats* Everything in-between. So dreamy indeed. Tender and breathtaking. Your words take me to the stars. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2021 4:52:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your cheerful comments. Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/12/2021 3:16:00 PM

With poetry such as this, I think you hold the skeletal key to open many a heart and imagination. Thankyou for sharing Vijay, sending synergy and good vibes your way :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2021 3:24:00 PM

Always an honor when you visit. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Vienna. Many thanks.

Hello There

Date: 5/12/2021 12:49:00 PM

Allow me to finally appear on your page, though I've always loved and appreciated your works. Sorry it has been so long. This poem is enchanting, Vijay. I don't know what else to say. A fave for sure.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2021 3:23:00 PM

Pleasure is all mine to welcome you my friend. I am thrilled that you graced my page with your presence and delightful remarks. Much appreciate, HT--many many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/12/2021 7:42:00 AM

A song of the heart composed by love and offered to the world as poetic rapture! Superbly written , my dearest friend, Vijay. May your poem be well received and placed among the winners where it belongs. Blessings !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2021 3:21:00 PM

Song of the heart it is my friend. Much appreciate your lovely comments, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/12/2021 6:18:00 AM

This is absolutely beautiful. You are so talented Vijay. Your poetry takes me to nice places, always. I love the line out of so many nice ones...Etching purple skyline tinged in amethyst. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2021 3:20:00 PM

So nice to hear, Heidi. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Glad you liked the poem. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2021 5:33:00 AM

- You have so many beautiful poems, Vijay ... this is one of the most beautiful I have read ... Congratulations .... I bend in the dust of admiration - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2021 3:19:00 PM

So very kind of you to say so, Anne-Lise. It is a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate--many thanks.