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Alliterative Haiku

3/1/2011 ~seasonal serpents poisonous serpentine shapes... slither salty seas For and in Honor of Chris Aechtner And Contest: Alliterative Haiku

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Nick Bagnall

Date: 3/14/2011 5:16:00 AM

I'm not quite sure what it means/describes, but it is a lovely sentence to read out loud, very nice.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/6/2011 6:46:00 PM

That last line is the topper and puts the poem across the finish line. Thank you, John. i enjoy your contests very much and I like your style. You are one of the best and indispensible on this site. regards, Gerard.

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2011 1:30:00 PM

aaah, I can almost see it slithering, wonderful and best of luck~~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2011 11:54:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Very creative and descriptive work..I am so glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for your presence at my work ..Your comments are greatly appreciated..Sara

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/2/2011 6:43:00 AM

Very nice alliteration John...good luck in the contest...Jimmy