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Alliterative Haiku

3/1/2011 ~seasonal serpents poisonous serpentine shapes... slither salty seas For and in Honor of Chris Aechtner And Contest: Alliterative Haiku

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Nick Bagnall
Date: 3/14/2011 5:16:00 AM
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I'm not quite sure what it means/describes, but it is a lovely sentence to read out loud, very nice.
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Gerard Keogh Jr.
Date: 3/6/2011 6:46:00 PM
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That last line is the topper and puts the poem across the finish line. Thank you, John. i enjoy your contests very much and I like your style. You are one of the best and indispensible on this site. regards, Gerard.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2011 1:30:00 PM
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aaah, I can almost see it slithering, wonderful and best of luck~~
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/2/2011 11:54:00 AM
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Reads like a winner to me..Very creative and descriptive work..I am so glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for your presence at my work ..Your comments are greatly appreciated..Sara
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Jimmy Anderson
Date: 3/2/2011 6:43:00 AM
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Very nice alliteration John...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/1/2011 11:59:00 PM
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well, you sure got down those s's for those slithering snakes, john. Way to go on this one. Luv, Andrea
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 3/1/2011 12:37:00 PM
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Amazing use of Alliteration Moses and a great topic too... your words brought the page to life luv.. good luck in the contest...
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/1/2011 10:17:00 AM
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beautiful alliteration with nice visual, john
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