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Alliterative Haiku

3/1/2011

~seasonal serpents
       poisonous serpentine shapes...
           slither salty seas

      For and in Honor of Chris Aechtner
And Contest: Alliterative Haiku

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Nick Bagnall

March 14, 2011 at 5:16 AM

I'm not quite sure what it means/describes, but it is a lovely sentence to read out loud, very nice.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

March 6, 2011 at 6:46 PM

That last line is the topper and puts the poem across the finish line. Thank you, John. i enjoy your contests very much and I like your style. You are one of the best and indispensible on this site. regards, Gerard.

Constance La France

March 2, 2011 at 1:30 PM

aaah, I can almost see it slithering, wonderful and best of luck~~

Sara Kendrick

March 2, 2011 at 11:54 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Very creative and descriptive work..I am so glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for your presence at my work ..Your comments are greatly appreciated..Sara