Alliteration -Sleek Steel Ships

Steady and stealth are
NASA’s sleek steel ships,
their bright brazen tail lights
trail baby blue skies 
as they climb cliffs of rugged cloud banks
~*~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Congrats on your win Annalise ~A.O
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April 5, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Annalise, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 3:55 PM
I love this one - what wonderful descriptions. Hope you're both having a great Easter x
Ryerson Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 11:53 AM
Not only is this great alliteration, you have captured the awe and beauty of a NASA launch perfectly...the last two lines are priceless - Tim
Horsman Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 10:44 AM
this is amazing poetry Annalise, the visual you have made an art of, wonderful to read this...
Ellison Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 8:09 AM
I have been so blown away by NASA's accomplishments! We have become blasé and forget what momentous things are happening in our launches to distant stars! So intriguing... as is your poem! Hugs and much love, Jack xox
Sivey Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 5:22 PM
This is a wonderful write Annalise! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a special piece, Great Work!!
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