Alley

I can still taste the frigid night, that rested upon my lips
The moon hid beneath the passing clouds, it was dark
Lost was I, yet something inside of me knew where to head
I followed, and I discovered the purest love one can find, a fire did spark

Standing to herself, she doubted her poet to arise from the bitter night
The knott in her troat tigthen as she saw his eyes in the closing distance
Stepping out of his car, he spoke unto her, and she ran into his keep so tight
Finding herself lost of words, she spoke not, but the feeling was so right

The two hearts knew then and there
That forever together they belonged as one
She became his moon, as he her sun
Holding her, he whispered into her soul, see my heart its yours to keep, fair and square

The sun shall never rise the same again
Bright is the moon that lightens the night, its her smile that reigns his heart
Her throne sits warm, for no one could ever replace her dimples in any part
Touch me my love, for without thy touch truly I shall go insane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. God bless you. Always, Dane
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April 21, 2009 at 8:17 AM
Congrats Eduardo on "Alley" being featured. Vince
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April 21, 2009 at 1:10 AM
A beautiful piece, congratulations on this piece being featured this week, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie. Check your mail...
Winter Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 4:38 PM
Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
Smalling Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 9:59 AM
Your poem Alley is a wonderful love poem, congratulations on it beingfeatured. You have a lot of talent ... love and smiles
Smalling Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 9:51 AM
Your poem Alley is a wonderful love poem, congratulations on it beingfeatured. You have a lot of talent ... love and smiles
Christian Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 6:35 AM
wow congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless from diane
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April 19, 2009 at 9:44 PM
Eduardo, congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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April 19, 2009 at 8:26 PM
Dear Eduardo,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Alley" being Featured this week An Amazing Write of a true LOVE Superb ALWAYS...HG
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April 19, 2009 at 5:51 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha
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April 19, 2009 at 1:51 PM
Interesting view on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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April 19, 2009 at 1:06 PM
Hello Eduardo, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Mine is also featured Keep on posting. Ernilando
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April 19, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Romance is still alive....Conradulations on being featuered....RKay
Jordan Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 9:46 AM
Eduardo - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
Guzzi Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Such romance!!! (you are flipping the th's...right...bright..Bright is the moon that lightens the night...double check where ever you have a ht or ght..it's tighten) I have a whole family of folks who do this. Spell check is a MUST. Light & Love
Shahwan Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Beautifully structured. In respect of free verse...May I suggest you develop rhyming stanza though free verse is completely free....8sylab. for each beginning line; and 6 sylab. for the other half of the line, and so forth. I love your poetry...awaiting to read more.
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April 6, 2009 at 1:16 PM
the beauty of your rhyme always pierces my heart my poet. -Alley Poe
Goff Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Eduardo, I love the sincere devotion the writer has for this Lady, very wonderful to read! Jim
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