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Allergy

What turns our bodies To this and that What signals To turn, that to this Strawberries, peanuts Shampoo's as well To turn our beauty Make us swell Rashes that weep Sores so red Painful signals Rush to our head Some of us scratch Some can leave This incredible urge These allergies Tablets and cream Man made remedies Appease our aches As time will see In natures world She has many cures But what we make our self I'm not too sure

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Date: 5/9/2009 6:05:00 PM
The mystery of the ages is all right with me ... if only they inspire you to write more talented poetry.
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Date: 5/9/2009 10:32:00 AM
Brilliant description, this is me on a good day!! Well done James
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:23:00 AM
I'm not too sure about man's concoctions either, sometimes. Very nice is your allergy poem. Compliments are from a long-term allergy sufferer who somehow has been spared from the sneezes for about 3years. It must be the Loratadine, Singular, and the natural herb Echinacea. Oh, never leave out God. I am happy to have reduced allergy symptoms... Nice write, James Love, Dane
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