Margarita Lillico Poet Rhyme

All Yours

Congrats on your first born, my friend, 
Your playboy days are soon to end, 
Diaper change and sleepless nights 
Come with your new paternal rights. 
I know you meant  a one night stand 
Too bad it’s not the way you planned. 
Turns out your fling was with my wife 
Support them both, they’re yours for life. 

February 29, 2020

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Daniel Turner March 1, 2023 at 3:15 PM This poem is priceless, LOL Margarita, I love your sense of humor. LMFAO

Cecilia Macfarlane February 23, 2021 at 3:14 AM I see why this won, witty with a great message that karma is real. Big congrats. Hugs

Jennifer Fenn February 22, 2021 at 12:03 PM I love this message to all those cheats out there! You go girl!

Franci Hoffman February 22, 2021 at 11:23 AM Delightful! Margarita Lillico February 22, 2021 at 11:32 AM Thank you, Franci. M.

Richard Morris February 22, 2021 at 8:36 AM Love it. One can only ponder, to how many it may be directed. Margarita Lillico February 22, 2021 at 11:27 AM They only know:) Margarita

Nobuntu Ntobela February 22, 2021 at 8:22 AM ???? lol okay , this is good Margarita Lillico February 22, 2021 at 11:26 AM Girls must love it more:) Margarita

Camp Cab February 22, 2021 at 6:53 AM I found this poem funny and understanding. Great Poem. Margarita Lillico February 22, 2021 at 11:33 AM Thanks, Camp. M.

Darrell Rose February 22, 2021 at 6:22 AM Hahahahahaha. Oh my goodness ! What a delightful and well written poem ! Made me laugh. Have a great day Darrell Margarita Lillico February 22, 2021 at 11:34 AM Thanks Darrell. As long as we aren't in those shoes:) M.

Patrick Mehr February 22, 2021 at 6:10 AM Cold truth Fun and games out the window This was very nice ... bit of a sting to it. Life aint always sweet.

Nicholas Windle February 22, 2021 at 6:01 AM that's the game of life we play always a consequence we have to pay. love it appeals to my nature of retribution pure first-class piece of work good use of stanzas and is well-metered thanks put a smile on my face

Jan Allison January 24, 2021 at 6:16 PM oh gosh dark humour indeed, many congrats on your win Margarita:-) hugs Jan xx

Elaine George January 24, 2021 at 5:59 AM GOOD ONE! Witty and at the same time so serious. Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine

Gary Radice January 24, 2021 at 5:51 AM Very good. I love the kicker at the end. Cheers - Gary

Aditi Mishra June 22, 2020 at 8:51 AM Oh this is such an amusing and witty write Margarita. Congratulations on your win :)

John Watt June 21, 2020 at 11:33 PM Ah, the karma is rich in this one! Love your rhythm and flow. Congrats on your win ~ John

Eve Roper June 21, 2020 at 10:38 AM this is an awesome introduction to a gift, Margarita. Congratulations to your win. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2020 at 5:10 PM Ha ha, that’s one way to get rid of a cheater. Patrick Mehr February 22, 2021 at 6:11 AM make that 2 cheaters , sir.

Line Gauthier March 5, 2020 at 5:37 PM Wow what wit! What a sense of humour! What a lovely read, Margarita. A FAVE for me. Too funny! Superbly penned.

Silent One March 1, 2020 at 2:11 PM Lovely dedication..

Rico Leffanta March 1, 2020 at 12:45 PM WELL composed and scribed! I thought Oh Henry was an American candy bar? Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 29, 2020 at 8:23 PM LOL!!!! Awesome poem Margarita! xomo

John Gondolf February 29, 2020 at 3:38 PM Such an event would certainly put a damper on a playboys lifestyle. Nicely written, Margarita. Hugs, John