All Work and No Play

I’d think about
Work without Play -
And doubt my mind…

For Nancy’s If I didn't think what I think, here's what I'd think contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 7:54 PM
Good one and I bet you at least will do well in her contest!
La France Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 5:22 PM
Hi Jack, this form is hopeless for me, not sure why, but I think you nailed it, awesome and best of luck in the contest. I am slowly recovering but gosh, good and bad days, ups and downs, still not working, will I ever be able to agai?, not sure anyways you are always in my thoughts and prayers. Love Constance
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August 26, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Jack, i like your entry,, good luck in the contest...always~PD
Song Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Strong message in this than bauk, Jack...Why I think even Dr. Ram would like this one! This form is one of my weaknesses! :) Thanks for stopping by! ps..any word from the project?...curious. gwendolen
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 1:32 PM
Good one, Jack..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Yes, I surely would doubt my mind with that one my friend! This is a fabulous entry into Nancy's contest! Great Work!!
Grisetti Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 12:10 PM
A grat peom for Nancy. I have no idea what to write.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 12:00 PM
I'll think about it ..xx
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