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All We Can Abolish

Horrid hellion hunger that rips apart the soul Sadly starving siblings where death takes its toll Crippled children crying a mother lives in hell While wicked ways of man making money for their sell Vindictive violent victories, of man vs. man Kabbalistic killing kids a death wish with a plan Wrathful widespread Wars with blood over spilling Betraying battling brothers kiss their cross before the killing Repeated rancorous raping for only a woman knows Destructive demeanour dancing the desecration of a rose Sabotaging silent stealing virginity within the night Demonic deception dwelling a battle we must fight Let us pray now for all of this we can abolish Breathe in strength and give the world its needed polish. March.21.2016 THE ALPHABET CONTEST - LETTER A- Abolish -By Alfred Vassallo

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/28/2016 1:44:00 AM

"... betraying battling brothers kiss their cross before the killing," The hypocrisy expressed in this line is startling, and powerful. I don't understand how one can keep two contradictory ideals as simultaneously true in their heads. Loved your title and your enlightening message, WW.

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/28/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thank you my friend Tim...unfortunately this is the world we live in now...but we as poets have to send a strong message to correct this... we are the scribes for heaven (((sound the poetic trumpets))) lol...god bless...^WW^

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/21/2016 5:04:00 PM

"wicked ways of man"...."all of this we can abolish"....^WW^ you hit nerves and truths that desperately NEED addressing! May many read this and "breathe in strength!" NICE! ^WW^!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/21/2016 8:27:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend Walter...you are one the few who understand of such things...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/21/2016 10:05:00 AM

Whew! Lot of work to do. Well done W/W. Great sonnet, good luck in the contest...

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/21/2016 10:24:00 AM

Ah- we can do it all early one morning...have enough time for some soup later in the afternoon...and catch a hockey game later that night lol...what do you think Charlie...and thanks for your comment my friend...god bless...^WW^