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All Way Too Easy

Breaking through air And all that I hear Is my heart beating fast Pulse throbbing in my ear Taking all in-- mind going frantic Yet calm overpowers in a high I wanna look back and check, But I can't risk it tonight Running and running --Everlasting energy Just stick to the plan Just get to safety A few blocks to go Start to slow down my pace Hands in jacket pockets Wearing my player face Stroll a few blocks 27th and Bay Parking deck to floor 4 And drive on away Body erect, full of life and pride Dial up my partner with a grin "It's done. It went perfect. There's not a trace left of him. There was no reason to worry. We had nothing to lose. It was all way too easy To kidnap and kill Truth." May 2010

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Date: 5/17/2010 2:16:00 PM
what a great ending! a real turn about...I had thought the verse about madness...perhaps truth and insanity? I bet you'd like my verse on madness & creativity/art titled Part 1 Madness Rides on Moonlight & Part2 (wouldn't fit on 1 page..sorry!)
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:28:00 PM
Nice write.
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:16:00 PM
Oooh, that's a powerful statement at the end. You had me wondering where this was going to lead. Somehow, I feared she was being stalked, just trying to get to her car safely. Hitchcock-like twist! Nice work, Destiny. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2010 3:33:00 PM
well done Destiny, cool all the way to the end,..p..d
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