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All That Remains

Beyond all the hard times before Eternal and pure at the core Beyond all the guilt and the pains I love you is all that remains In spite of the worry and strife I'm honored you entered my life In spite of the losses and gains I love you is all that remains There are no more debts to forgive Nor any regrets to relive There are no more smudges or stains I love you is all that remains Let richer men offer up pearls A poor man gives this my dear girls Just a verse that proudly exclaims I love you is all that remains *Written several years ago for Christmas to my three daughters who often asked, "How did you ever put up with us?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2015 3:34:00 PM
Love's all we need
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Date: 4/15/2012 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on our poetry being featured this week Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 9:04:00 AM
Hi Tim-What a wonderful way to tell your daughters how much you love them.This is so beautiful and moving,all of it.But I especially love the second to last verse.Those simple words really touched me.Your girls are very lucky and I'm sure very proud to have a dad not only caring and understanding but very talented too.Congratulations for being featured or I might have missed this remarkable piece.Thank you for sharing it.I would also like to add it to my favourites please. Luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 4/11/2012 5:08:00 PM
Tim - Wonderful poem. Enjoyed reading this. - Gail
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Date: 4/11/2012 8:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poems...Patrick
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Date: 4/8/2012 8:31:00 PM
Love and scheme and content, the bands alright too. Great work
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Date: 10/15/2009 9:21:00 PM
This is one of the sweetest things I've ever read. Just lovely. Hugs! Donna
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Date: 8/25/2009 7:41:00 AM
This is lovely, Tim! Guidance is great, but it's the unconditional love that they remember. Your daughters are very lucky girls!
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Tim. Wishing you the best always in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2009 5:16:00 PM
nice one, keep writing
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