All Soupers Invited

Dear friends, I hope you’ll travel soon:
My Souper party’s on the moon;
The first arrival gets a prize.
Although you won’t believe your eyes:
The scenery is pretty stark.
Perhaps we’ll boogie in the dark.
For clothing won’t you take a guess…
The atmosphere is lacking, yes -
And yet we’ll have a lively time.
The entrance fee is just a dime!

for Judy's Party contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/27/2014 10:07:00 AM
I love how original your contest entries are... And great.
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Date: 8/12/2014 5:31:00 PM
I,m in for this, although belated,, love the imagery Jack, congrats...
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:23:00 PM
Always a delight to read you, Jack. It's been a while, I know, and owe you. : ) However, I'll catch up soon... Congratulations on your win! Best wishes as always to you, dear friend. xxx Annalise
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:40:00 PM
JACK,, Congrats, on your win. <3 LINDA
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Date: 8/5/2014 9:26:00 AM
What a great place to party! :) grats on your wins, how fun it would be!
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Date: 8/5/2014 9:21:00 AM
Gonna grab my dime, jump in my spaceship and be right over Jack...GREAT idea for the contest! Congrats - Tim
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Date: 8/4/2014 1:22:00 AM
Sorry, I could not reach your party but enjoyed the write, jack. congrats
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:04:00 PM
Great invite Jack! I heard that all dances are going to be slow...but those space-suits will be fun-spoiling, I'm afraid!!:) Congrats on your win! // paul
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Date: 8/3/2014 12:14:00 PM
I'll surely spring for a dime for that one! I love some of your lines.."the scenery pretty stark" is pretty funny..congrats. BG
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Date: 8/3/2014 12:06:00 PM
returning with my congrats for your win:-) Hugs Jan (jadazzle)
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:51:00 AM
Lovely n witty is ur write Jack ! Congrats on huge win !
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 7/19/2014 2:53:00 PM
Pleased to read this fun one Jack Keep well Joe.
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Date: 7/18/2014 7:20:00 PM
Kinda pricy isn't it.. Very fun read, Jack my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/18/2014 12:28:00 PM
This made me smile Jack :) hope you are doing okay. Cold and rainy over here..
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Date: 7/14/2014 9:37:00 AM
Fun read... Enjoyed it greatly... Boogie and party on...
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:21:00 AM
Jack's World! Jack's World! Party on Garth. Party on Wayne. Party on jack! :)
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:18:00 AM
That sure sounds like unique fun, having a party on the moon-- one can do the moonwalk, but hopefully nobody moons other people there--O_o..... so wonderful again to see you are a PM, I am glad for you, Jack!
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Date: 7/7/2014 4:37:00 AM
weeeee this lovely I have never been in the moon :D i d like to join.. :D
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Date: 7/6/2014 5:22:00 PM
Very witty and fun to read. I would love to join this party :)
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Date: 7/6/2014 9:30:00 AM
Hmmm, for just a dime, I'm all IN, Jack This is sure cute. I hope to see many other new ones posted by you soon!!! thanks for all your comments the other day. I am really sick but I am making a goal to finish my replies and then go rest. The throwing up part is at least over with!!!
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:17:00 AM
TMI. Too Much Ick. :)
Date: 7/5/2014 10:26:00 PM
What a great line this is: "Perhaps we’ll boogie in the dark." What a creative and fun poem this is. Left me with a lingering smile! #7
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Date: 7/5/2014 5:40:00 PM
Reads like a winner..It has good flow to it..Thanks for the all the visits to my pages..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2014 4:54:00 PM
I'm almost boarding!.. this so warm of you to do, jack.. really enjoyed the soup spirit.. huggs
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Date: 7/5/2014 4:04:00 PM
Ill be there! Looking for a good travel agent right now..you made me smile. BG
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