All Soupers Invited

Dear friends, I hope you’ll travel soon:
My Souper party’s on the moon;
The first arrival gets a prize.
Although you won’t believe your eyes:
The scenery is pretty stark.
Perhaps we’ll boogie in the dark.
For clothing won’t you take a guess…
The atmosphere is lacking, yes -
And yet we’ll have a lively time.
The entrance fee is just a dime!

for Judy's Party contest
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Eastman Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 10:07 AM
I love how original your contest entries are... And great.
Horsman Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 5:31 PM
I,m in for this, although belated,, love the imagery Jack, congrats...
Haick Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Always a delight to read you, Jack. It's been a while, I know, and owe you. : ) However, I'll catch up soon... Congratulations on your win! Best wishes as always to you, dear friend. xxx Annalise
A   Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 10:40 PM
JACK,, Congrats, on your win. <3 LINDA
Nance Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 9:26 AM
What a great place to party! :) grats on your wins, how fun it would be!
Ryerson Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Gonna grab my dime, jump in my spaceship and be right over Jack...GREAT idea for the contest! Congrats - Tim
Mehta Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 1:22 AM
Sorry, I could not reach your party but enjoyed the write, jack. congrats
Callus Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Great invite Jack! I heard that all dances are going to be slow...but those space-suits will be fun-spoiling, I'm afraid!!:) Congrats on your win! // paul
Gorelick Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 12:14 PM
I'll surely spring for a dime for that one! I love some of your lines.."the scenery pretty stark" is pretty funny..congrats. BG
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 12:06 PM
returning with my congrats for your win:-) Hugs Jan (jadazzle)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Lovely n witty is ur write Jack ! Congrats on huge win !
Konos Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 11:27 AM
Thank you for entering my contest
Maverick Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Pleased to read this fun one Jack Keep well Joe.
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Kinda pricy isn't it.. Very fun read, Jack my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Neels Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 12:28 PM
This made me smile Jack :) hope you are doing okay. Cold and rainy over here..
Eastman Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Fun read... Enjoyed it greatly... Boogie and party on...
Johnson Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Jack's World! Jack's World! Party on Garth. Party on Wayne. Party on jack! :)
K. Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 9:18 AM
That sure sounds like unique fun, having a party on the moon-- one can do the moonwalk, but hopefully nobody moons other people there--O_o..... so wonderful again to see you are a PM, I am glad for you, Jack!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 4:37 AM
weeeee this lovely I have never been in the moon :D i d like to join.. :D
Anglesey Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Very witty and fun to read. I would love to join this party :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Hmmm, for just a dime, I'm all IN, Jack This is sure cute. I hope to see many other new ones posted by you soon!!! thanks for all your comments the other day. I am really sick but I am making a goal to finish my replies and then go rest. The throwing up part is at least over with!!!
Johnson Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 9:17 AM
TMI. Too Much Ick. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 10:26 PM
What a great line this is: "Perhaps we’ll boogie in the dark." What a creative and fun poem this is. Left me with a lingering smile! #7
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Reads like a winner..It has good flow to it..Thanks for the all the visits to my pages..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:54 PM
I'm almost boarding!.. this so warm of you to do, jack.. really enjoyed the soup spirit.. huggs
Gorelick Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Ill be there! Looking for a good travel agent right now..you made me smile. BG
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