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All Smiles and Frowns

Smile

A design from clouds
That covers a soft red sky
At perfect sunset

Frown

This sky turning grey
From darker invasive clouds
At tearful midday

Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's "What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown" contest

8/17/2012

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2012

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/6/2012 3:07:00 PM Way to GO, Russell. Big congrats for your big win. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/5/2012 7:36:00 PM Russell, my smile come with a frown at the end... , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/5/2012 5:19:00 AM Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Russell. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 9/3/2012 5:40:00 PM Great poem Russell, congratulations on your win 1st place!! Lee Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 9/3/2012 1:28:00 PM So, after the tears then the sky turned back to a smile, right?...Hey Russell, congrats on painting a great image for this contest...Great work from your talented pen!!! gwendolen Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 9/3/2012 9:42:00 AM I am so glad to see you at first place. Love you haiku. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/3/2012 9:38:00 AM YEAH! Russ number 1!! couldn't happen to a sweeter man. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Delysia Hendricks Date: 9/3/2012 9:34:00 AM Indeed a worthy first placement. Good work and congratulations, Russell. :) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/3/2012 8:55:00 AM congrats Russell on a most amazing win for first place with this precious poem of superb analogy and soft imagery luv .. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/3/2012 6:49:00 AM Congratulations once again Russell, well done xx Login to Reply

Apoorva Patrikar Date: 9/3/2012 6:46:00 AM congratulations! good one Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 9/3/2012 6:41:00 AM Congrats Russell on claiming 1st Place!!! Excellent my friend,.. MJF Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/18/2012 12:21:00 PM I love how you involved nature in this challenge. I did mine totally differently and not as well! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 8/17/2012 9:00:00 PM A couple of very descriptive senryu entries. Both are a delight to read. Login to Reply