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All Screwed Up

All Screwed Up 

I am all screwed up in the head..
Dangerous emotions; thoughts misled.

My will to live has died..
Trials and tribulations coincide..

Heart bleeds, the throes of battle.
Last breath, turmoil blameful.

Alone and lost in this present domain..
Can't escape the past to which I am chained..

Living a lie, tear stained face..
Feeling dejected, out of place..

Harsh words, degrading submission..
Soul depleted, now a vixen.

Copyright © Erin Werner | Year Posted 2008

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Adeleke Adeite Date: 8/16/2009 7:27:00 AM This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 8/14/2009 1:05:00 PM Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 8/11/2009 1:07:00 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 8/11/2009 3:39:00 AM a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/10/2009 5:28:00 AM Erin - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/10/2009 4:33:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Erin. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 8/9/2009 12:30:00 PM Congratulations on being featured, Erin. There is hope. And chains can be broken with God's help. Feel better, friend. Keep writing! DAS-J Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 8/9/2009 11:20:00 AM congrats on being feature. Login to Reply

Date: 8/9/2009 10:45:00 AM The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/9/2009 9:42:00 AM Erin I really don't see you as any vixen - btw what exactly is a vixen - Isn't that one of the reindeer - Just kidding - Congrats on being featured this week, MJ Login to Reply

Michael Torres Date: 10/30/2008 3:21:00 PM Well done Erin and very deserving.My choice would have put you at the top. God bless you Michael Torres Login to Reply

Erin Werner Date: 9/22/2008 10:56:00 PM Thanks for all the kind words:) Erin Login to Reply

Cayetano Young Date: 9/22/2008 9:46:00 PM Congratulations on your win on Charles Fuller's contest. Well done! warm regards, Gino Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 9/22/2008 4:43:00 PM Congratulations Erin on your win in Charles Fuller's contest! Well done! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/9/2008 12:33:00 PM Sharing grief and disappointment helps to heal. I think we all do a little of that on this website, and it really does release some of the anger and pain. Keep writing, and keep on..going on..one day at a time! Sincerely, Carrie Login to Reply

Derrick Burton Date: 8/9/2008 10:17:00 AM wow.hopefully this site will provide the outlet to release some of that tention life sometimes offer.It is a test of our strength from the lord.I too, sometimes feel this way and need to reach rather thrue prayer or poetry. BOTH WRITE ON Login to Reply