Erin Werner Poet Rhyme

All Screwed Up

All Screwed Up 

I am all screwed up in the head..
Dangerous emotions; thoughts misled.

My will to live has died..
Trials and tribulations coincide..

Heart bleeds, the throes of battle.
Last breath, turmoil blameful.

Alone and lost in this present domain..
Can't escape the past to which I am chained..

Living a lie, tear stained face..
Feeling dejected, out of place..

Harsh words, degrading submission..
Soul depleted, now a vixen.

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Adeleke Adeite August 16, 2009 at 7:27 AM This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke

Laura Mckenzie August 14, 2009 at 1:05 PM Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

James Fraser August 11, 2009 at 1:07 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

Diane Christian August 11, 2009 at 3:39 AM a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane

Michael Jordan August 10, 2009 at 5:28 AM Erin - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2009 at 4:33 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Erin. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen August 9, 2009 at 12:30 PM Congratulations on being featured, Erin. There is hope. And chains can be broken with God's help. Feel better, friend. Keep writing! DAS-J

Christopher Higgins August 9, 2009 at 11:20 AM congrats on being feature.

August 9, 2009 at 10:45 AM The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Michael Jordan August 9, 2009 at 9:42 AM Erin I really don't see you as any vixen - btw what exactly is a vixen - Isn't that one of the reindeer - Just kidding - Congrats on being featured this week, MJ

Michael Torres October 30, 2008 at 3:21 PM Well done Erin and very deserving.My choice would have put you at the top. God bless you Michael Torres

Erin Werner September 22, 2008 at 10:56 PM Thanks for all the kind words:) Erin

Cayetano Young September 22, 2008 at 9:46 PM Congratulations on your win on Charles Fuller's contest. Well done! warm regards, Gino

Sharon Winter September 22, 2008 at 4:43 PM Congratulations Erin on your win in Charles Fuller's contest! Well done! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards August 9, 2008 at 12:33 PM Sharing grief and disappointment helps to heal. I think we all do a little of that on this website, and it really does release some of the anger and pain. Keep writing, and keep on..going on..one day at a time! Sincerely, Carrie

Derrick Burton August 9, 2008 at 10:17 AM wow.hopefully this site will provide the outlet to release some of that tention life sometimes offer.It is a test of our strength from the lord.I too, sometimes feel this way and need to reach rather thrue prayer or poetry. BOTH WRITE ON