All Quiet On the Western Front

I didn’t know enough
was enough
until it started
to bleed,
till the cold
metal dug under,
clipped nails,
trimmed skin,
munching piece
by piece like
Pac-man would cherries
or colorless ghosts

Father once said,
	You can never have enough
I don’t think 
father knew 
when enough 
was enough till 
it was beaten,
battered,
and bruised.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 4:54 PM
Interesting thoughts about pain. Your father must have been tough as nails and rawhide. Keep writing. Sara
Owens Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 9:32 PM
Good reading tonight...Enjoyed...Marty
Brown Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 4:15 PM
Thank you for sharing a little of you with us through your words today Parker. I enjoy reading your poetry. Love, Carol
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