Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

All Over My Mind

~All Over My Mind~       


                                            There is no other way to taste paradise..
                                     Like warm chocolate gliding down slow and nice..

                                           Lost in kisses that freeze time as lips savor...
                                  Hands intertwined in the warm flow that won't waiver...

                                             Butterflies that still dance on any stage...
                                       Touching each other with eyes that never age...

                                      All for this beautiful flower that came in rhymes...
                                        Which is why today you are all over my mind...

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Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2012 at 11:58 PM You are always outstanding .... just like a flower... blooming no matter what... how do you do it? and i wonder who's all over my mind today... hummm..may be someone who is getting random comments from me...always..your poet friend..pd

Red Fiery January 1, 2012 at 8:57 AM romantic gesture of poetry and utterly in prefect rhythm////cheers ! I shall return to read mre....cheers !!!!!!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair December 31, 2011 at 9:04 AM imaginative and well rendered..happy new year, jag

Bl Devnath December 31, 2011 at 8:21 AM My friend, I loved it so much. Your imagination is very fantastic. Thanks for commenting on my write. HAPPY NEW YEAR 2012,bl

David Williams December 31, 2011 at 7:35 AM Michael superb..David

Dawn Mclaughlin December 31, 2011 at 6:28 AM Beautiful loving erite Michael xx Happy new year x Journey Mcknight December 31, 2011 at 9:01 AM HAPPY NEW YEAR DAWNIE!!!!!!!wake up!!hahahaha Dawn Mclaughlin December 31, 2011 at 6:28 AM Write sorry typos xx

Russell Sivey December 30, 2011 at 10:06 PM Wow Michael, this is quite the write! The visualization is fantastic and your description that leads to the images in my mind(all over my mind) is done masterfully! I love it when your pen starts writing, we get to read some awesome stuff!! Great Work!!

Broken Butterfly December 30, 2011 at 9:43 PM This is really lovely Michael, thanks for viewing my flower poem. I had so much trouble in the layout, I finally decided to just centre it, and I sort of like it, like a butterly fluttering in the garden.

Cecilia Macfarlane December 30, 2011 at 8:42 PM It was a pleasure to read such a beautiful poem...hugs. Michael J. Falotico December 30, 2011 at 9:12 PM Thanks Cecilia, your words are so appreciated Hugs Michael