"all Our's" Part 5

A whispered sweet nothing can fill your ears...
Two twisted tongues can barely be heard...

Wandering hands in the dark find there way
When two lips meet there are no words to say...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bien Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 7:05 AM
so few words to get the meaning across...excellent JB
Babcock Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 11:30 AM
I love the smokin romance going on here. Twisted tongues, wandering hands, meeting lips. Wow to hot to handle. ha ha ha God Bless Phyl
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 8:38 AM
If for the contest, reads like a winners' circle..Passionate..Sara
Stella Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 7:25 AM
ok where are my smokes after reading this little hottie what super imagery to play along with too thanks again my friend for sharing and again for your kind comments keep these flowing over lips thrugh gums let that love fill those guns keep up the great work
Murphy Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 1:13 PM
so lovely enjoyed and thanks for your kind comments have a great weekend faleshia
Sweetheart Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Super passionate my White Knight .. your Jersey Girl is enjoying this one much... maybe we should put this in the GIANTS locker room before the game in anticipation of what comes after if the WIN..haha..luv..
Neels Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Dr. Ram, just made me laugh out loud with his comment. I have got so say Michael you sure have a way of making one think further then what your eyes see. Sultry Mr. F ;) love Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Two twisted tongues can barely be heard but your experience says, do they really? Michael, hahah. Of course I agree they say no words.
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