"all Ours" Part 2

In my arms
               you are scooped up,
                                        and led to paradise..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 8:53 PM
wow.... your the scooper picker up... you are amazing.. It is a joy to know you give and give... pd
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September 3, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Its so easy to picture this scene with your words Michael, enjoy the cooking today :) luv Wilma
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September 3, 2010 at 3:07 PM
such visions that surround this for I truely would nt miss as I send my kiss X
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September 3, 2010 at 2:25 PM
Please give me a "heads up" my White Knight ..if Part lll is coming ....soon... need to prepare my soul for it..luv..haha..
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September 3, 2010 at 2:24 PM
OK .. which way to Paradise please??? what beautiful words... passionate yet romantic.. emotional and soft ..sexy too.. what a visual..and Ron is smiling as I am reading them to him while we are driving HOME...yeah...
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