All of the Above

You're like the powdered sugar on top of my funnel cake
The chopped fresh fruits inside my favorite milk shake

The bowling ball candy paint on my Super Sport Impala
The sweet surprise when I bust my piggy bank and find a crisp, folded dollar

The sharp creases in my slacks when I'm dressed to impress
The pardon from the priest after a Catholic confess

The blue ribbon around my neck after a first place victory
The record breaking home run, "baby, you just made history"

The lights around the Big Apple
The crackle sound during a tackle

The Golden Anchors on a yacht
The back arching feeling when I've hit that spot

The "Home Sweet Home" mats at the door after a hard journey far from home
The best Travelocity deal ever presented by the "Roaming Gnome"

The one Golden watch in the case with the Silver chains
The Remedy, not just the anesthesia that cures your aches & pains

The Platinum record on a new, young musician's wall
The Red, Yellow and Orange colored leaves that pleases those in love with Fall, 

The crackle of the fireplace on a snowy winter evening
The realization that you've made the right choice after hours of difficult reasoning

The joy of watching your son graduate
The joy of knowing peace after dealing with hate

The 4 to 2 & 2, summed up for a child
The gentle breeze of a summer's eve... Soft, caressing and mild

You're sweet, you're sexy, you're smart, you're fun and you're funny
You're the only bee's hive around for a bear addicted to honey

Like this fiend's latest hit
Summed up, girl YOU are the "ish"

You're hard for me to hate, and easy for me to love
You're more than just amazing.  You're all of the above…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/22/2010 12:28:00 PM
this is some special person, better keep hangig onto them and giving all the love back!! enjoyed reading today!
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