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All of Springtime

Springtime's gold of a youthful moon covers me with languid reveries holding my gazes captive in woodland-- A portrait of birds, flora in endless variety weaves through marshy lanes, and I am stilled by this beauty-- the soft rise of all that glimmers in a rhythmic wave of spontaneity, reminding this proud man the reverence within the wild of woods. May 2018 Contest, Brian Strand Posted 16th of May 2018

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Date: 7/15/2018 2:40:00 PM
What a beautiful piece so filled with amazing imagery, reflective of lovely springtime! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 5/19/2018 10:11:00 PM
Lovely, Manny. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/17/2018 11:57:00 PM
how impressive esp the last lines, manny... the glory of nature humbles us!.. congratulations, man oh man!
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Date: 5/16/2018 9:59:00 PM
A elegant expression of appreciation, Manny, for the wonder and beauty of Nature. Your emotional and atmospheric imagery is captivating and your superb closing couplet is steeped in gratitude. Congratulations on your fine win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of nature's imagery. Well done.
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Date: 5/16/2018 9:26:00 AM
Congrats. Manny-- you've captured well that unique power of nature to pull on our souls, especially liked the last couplet.
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