All of a Sudden . . .

The sound of thunder grows louder each second
the tremor, the vibration inanimate yet like a weapon
Softly the rain pelts down on me
Setting the swollen clouds free . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 11:22 AM
Vivid as visual in sight, your good with words in expression, Sincerely Moses
Winter Avatar
June 14, 2009 at 6:50 AM
Love the before the storm atmosphere, and storms in general. You captured the imagery so well. Especially love your very last line. Love, Shar
Goff Avatar
June 14, 2009 at 5:34 AM
love the sound, energy and movement of this fine poem! Fathima, Jim
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