All My Firsts With You

When I first viewed your pictures in the net I knew I saw an Angel yet to be discovered. When I first sent you a message my hope of having a heavenly experience with you was created. When I first read your response, I felt so fulfilled and accomplished. When I first talked to you through the Phone, you made me so warm, Tender and calm. When I first chat with you, I realized how lucky I am to behold a rare germ and a wonderful companion. When I first saw you laugh, you sounded soft and too feminine to be real. After my first physical acquaintance with you, I was already so scared of missing you. When I first hugged and held you tightly, I prayed you will be mine and mine alone forever. When I first kissed you, I knew I have fallen in Love with you already. When I missed you passionately for the first time, I vowed never to allow you out of my sight again. You are my first lady, the first to mother my Children. The first to make them 3 and the first to watch them grow with me. If there would ever be a second to any or some or all of these experiences, you'd be the first to be second or even third or even the hundredth and all.
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Knapp Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Beautiful...
Makama Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 2:32 AM
thanks
Collins Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Ah to be first and to fall in love and then to love.... very nice Asheka
Makama Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Thanks Asheka
Roberts Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 8:55 PM
wow what lovely words, must be great to be a first. just as great to have such a person. Thanks for your great comments on my "What if" poem. I did appreciate it. Seren
Makama Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 5:28 AM
thanks a lot seren roberts
Khemlani Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Very well expressed. Tingling!
Makama Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 9:19 AM
thanks
Caldwell Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 5:24 PM
loved it and thanks for the kind words on my page
Makama Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 1:33 AM
thanks Selena
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 10:41 AM
Romantic and passionate.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for reading and commenting at my poem page.......
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Thanks Kash
Poyntz Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 8:19 AM
Fukon...very touching nd innocent. suggest you go back and edit the lt line of second verse. I m sure you meant to say " a rare gem' nd not ' rre germ'...although telling someone they are a rare germ would equally be a first! Great poem though.
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Thanks a lot Michael... I think you did not see it properly.... It is written as "rare" But thanks for the observation..
Forth-Eglon Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:04 AM
That was a lovely romantic poem, and I love the repetition of "The first". I have repetition in some of my poetry. Thank you for reading mine, by the way. Two more beauties coming up. Keep up the good work Funom. Your lady sounds very special!
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 10:11 AM
Thanks a lot Diane... It's funny to know I'm still single (never married)..
Makama Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Thanks a lot friends..
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:34 AM
A lovely romantic poem written here!!
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:32 AM
This is sOOoow beautiful written Funom...love it....yoy are brilliant ! - Thank you for visit mine poem and you are always welcome. :) - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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