Chetta Achara Poet Pantoum

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All My Daydreams

White softness falling from the sky,
the world is muted, hushed and still,
as I watch the twirling dance
I’m lost within a snow-filled trance.

The world is muted, hushed and still
the only sounds are birds sweet trills,
I’m lost within a snow-filled trance,
now my daydreams are enchanted.

The only sounds are birds sweet trills
as I watch the twirling dance,
now my daydreams are enchanted~
white softness falling from the sky.

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sara Etgen-Baker December 3, 2025 at 7:02 AM I felt as if I was caught up in your dream, like living in a snowglobe. I'll have to try this form. Liked it Chetta Achara December 3, 2025 at 7:21 AM Thank you. The pantoum was a challenge, and I did deviate from the pattern a little bit, but that is poetic license isn’t it?