All Jumbled

I've lost my mojo
Can't think
Can't write
I was better when solo
Can't be depressing
Wow, Fiona Apple isn't even helping
What is wrong with me?
Grinning like a Cheshire cat
Makes me want to smack
Myself
Help!
I'm losing it!
Gotta put Adele on my playlist
Maybe that will help me ignore
The person I'm falling for
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 7:13 AM
They say love is a form of insanity. Who knew the insane could be so happy! Good luck, I hope he treats you well.
Buil Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Hahaha! It sure is!!! Ah, he's one of those people treats everyone kind. :D So insanely happy! ;)
Hicks Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 9:57 AM
soup mail.
Buil Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 10:31 AM
Yayyy! lol!
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 10:47 PM
I LIKES this jumbled poem!!!
Buil Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 8:33 AM
Hahaha thank you!!!! :D
A   Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Caleah, yes,,, add the good sounding song to your playlist... right now is not the time to fall in love... JK... girl you can't stop love, music makes it easy to entrap yourself with more thoughts over the guy your falling for... a cute poem....Linda
Buil Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 8:34 AM
LOL!! I'm trying, I'm trying!! Hahaha! Grr, it's hard feeling this way and yet I'm loving it...it's crazy and weird and good just the way love should be. :D Thank you!! :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Timothy's comment is awesome...I will agree..I love how open you were with this write. Enjoyed!!! :)
Buil Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Thanks! I wasn't sure how it would be received since it was...well...JUMBLED! Ha!! Thanks so much! :D
Hicks Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 2:12 PM
I see you're very conflicted at the moment! A person once told me, on a different forum site that "You write the most genuine love pieces when you're not in a relationship with anyone... cause when you ARE in a relationship it takes up too much of your writing time". I'm not gonna agree or disagree, but what he said did make me think. Loved the way you expressed yourself in this... brilliant!
Buil Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 8:32 AM
Haha! That is SO TRUE! I do write better about love when I'm usually NOT. Hahaha, gonna avoid falling so that your writing will still be good? (Joke!!) Hopefully, I'll be able to delve back in my writing soon, cause all I'm seeing is sunshine and rainbows, lol! Thanks so much for your comment!!! :D
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