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All It Takes Is Surrender

All it Takes is Surrender Let me show you how I can save you Let me tell you who you are To be the Master of your needful I must understand What you are In this world where you are not sure of where to stand In this life of too much choice With the knowledge of a different voice All your doubt I can erase And in my mirror I will reveal you Let me give you Your place Let me show you how you can free me Make me more than I am And in your mirror you will see me Give to you what no one else can All it takes is surrender To relinquish every doubt Let me reveal your hidden beauty Its truth and its security In the dark and sensual light of your soul Lays the other half of the Inseparable All it takes is your surrender Give yourself Up to me And I will give you the promise of my princess Become the centre of my being Without the counter point of your submissiveness I become lost and as nothing All it takes is surrender For the giver and the taker both to win The offer is our salvation In a world which is forever struggling And I will stand before you Liberated by your bended knee Give to me in your willing slavery Give this your gift to me The opposing forces of decision The opposing forces of excitation Male and female in life’s united circle Beast and angel Is how we were meant to be Together we will be stronger There will be nothing we can’t face In this world of uncertainty We will know Our place All it takes is surrender To move your life into this grace All it takes is surrender For you to know Your place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/12/2008 8:29:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of surrender is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/11/2008 4:14:00 AM
Wow, this poem is also one of love - well written And welcome to the soup Peace Fathima
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Date: 10/10/2008 4:52:00 PM
WOW! this is a great write, I felt pulled in by the writer, absolutely beautiful and welcome to the soup, take care D-nyce
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