Notes About The Poem

All Isn't Quiet

a strong wind whistles
in the calm of misty dawn ~
leaves stampeding east




Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest  (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
5/7/5 syllable count
Checked on www.howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 08/16/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Deepa Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 11:26 PM
A great Haiku with beautiful imageries dear Edward sir:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring us. Take care.Warmest regards sent to you..
Mcgee Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 2:20 PM
This is a favorite for me Edward..what great imagery..love that last line.
Ibeh Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit and the fav, Jeanne:-). Stay blessed, my friend! <3
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations on your win, Edward, great imagery giving it deep feelings of the storm. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 5:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:18 PM
excellent imagery Edward, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, Jan:-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:19 PM
wow, that stampeding line was off the charts. EXCELLENT. Congrats on the win, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, Andrea:-) I'm glad you loved it!
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Edward, congratulations to you. Love your word choice - especially "stampede." Great visual.
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Thanks so much, Sam:-)
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:09 AM
Ed, congratulations on your winning placement with your excellent haiku, love the movement in this!
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Tania:-) Most obliged.
Poetry Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 3:18 AM
FaithfUl translation of nature" ways... salute alkas
Ibeh Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Thank you, AP:-)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Brilliant. I love it!!! God bless you, dear friend :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Thank you so much, Regina:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Hello Edward, this is Mother's natures Soothing for the soul. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Hello Edward, Enjoy your day my friend. You are welcome. Blessings. Darlene.
Ibeh Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Thank you, Darlene:-) Enjoy your day as well, my friend!
Mcgee Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 8:41 AM
This is a lovely write of the coming of fall. :D
Ibeh Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Jeanne:-)
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