All In the Title

“Remembering when” I looked into “The eye of the beast”
Not “10 minutes to decide” just a few seconds at least
“My very first time” alone with you in the meadow
Whether “Dreams or reality” we had to go 
“I never thought it would be like this”
I expected a walk a sweet tender kiss
“We didn’t listen” to the warnings around
It was like “A ripple In time” love did abound
“Our heart” was beating, it is as one
Then the time came I thought you were gone
“What is love” this feeling “It Hurts” so
I knew then I wouldn’t let you to go.
“A flame once burned” I would not let it die
Not the passing so quick as “The coma butterfly”
Never did I want to have “Empty arms”
I knew you were mine with all of your charms.
“I paid the toll” in my mind was the thought
My fingers flicked the number for the help that I sought
Then the sweetest words ever and this I can tell
When you did look up and ask Are you an Angel?

© 25/08/2013 GG

It was going to be in the contest but I see I am too late.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 4:33 PM
love this girl, wonderful how titles can flow, and makes awesome poetry, pity about the contest,
May Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 1:08 PM
beautiful write Mandy...very nice ending...best wishes
A   Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 11:04 AM
a wonderful poem...Linda
Macfarlane Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 3:30 PM
This is awesome....sorry to hear it was late for the contest! Hugs
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