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All In a Days Win

Drifting as the snow topped alps
Town to Town
State to state
Nothing of warmth in sight
Becoming presents itself
In the mist of the cry
Acting as if is
Not enough
Becoming a part 
Assures survival
A thing can not be against it self
It can only turn 
Making relief
 



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 12:38:00 PM
I love this poem Vennie. Why not enter this poem in Yasmin's Snow Competition. -Mohammad
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Vennie Burns
Date: 3/16/2012 9:47:00 AM
Mohammad you are too kind... Thanks so much!
Date: 3/10/2012 9:07:00 AM
Very nice poetry.... Michael
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Vennie Burns
Date: 3/16/2012 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for your comment it gives inward smiles.

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