09/11/20
Second Place
'All in a Day ' Contest by William Kekaulla
ALL IN A DAY Mass of aqua drops, as if some simple dimples dancing on top of river-waves as ripples non-stop under soft Sun rays on start of the day. Mass of aqua drops in fervent fervor propagating as waves of river. Morning Sun showed sizzling soon blazing at hot scorching noon. Those aqua masses evaporate, separate themselves from river surface leaving no trace. Quick to vaporize and next to rise up, soaring high under care of warm air reaching sky. Clustered at afternoon as clouds in platoon. Sun was almost down when clouds make frown. Intermittent drizzling started slow under Sun-glow That aqua mass now in rain-flow split Sun rays into rainbow on rapture: Colorful spectrum- show to be captured by sky-canvas, oblivious. Now the aqua mass in form of showers falling on river top recycling water power.
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