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                    Wedding Memorabilia

Just like a winding river, blue notes trickle down and streams along the ocean where they were heard all around unique each in their tempo sailing in a whirl of life's dance; with distinct flow in sweet motion to be adorned as one long song Still a rhapsody has its fading as with a prelude there must be an end, like seasons with ellipses that pause only to open new lilts of fresh cycle; my passages turning into another tune awaiting the chances of a river's journey...all in a day. ------------- William Kekaula’s All In A Day Contest 9/7/2020

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Date: 9/20/2020 1:35:00 AM
Wow. Really wow. I feel you wrote the feelings I wanted to express. Only yours is art. Can I ask if you work at your poems? Really congratulations. I read poetry all day every day classics and amateur and you took my breath away. The standard here at poetry soup is already outstanding
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Nette :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2020 8:40:00 PM
Choice words appropriates this wondrous entry of yours, Nette, exquisite expressions articulated, 'twas a truly mesmerizing delivery! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
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Date: 9/16/2020 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
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Date: 9/10/2020 12:47:00 AM
A great way to reminisce memories, Nette:)
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Date: 9/9/2020 9:56:00 AM
You recalled a great deal my dear friend - going through letters, photos or maybe poems, brings back unforgettable memories. You are so right - your poem is magnifique! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/8/2020 9:19:00 PM
what a thoughtfully lucid tapestry of recollection...I hope you are doing well Nette :)
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Date: 9/8/2020 7:25:00 PM
You seem pensive in this write, taking small strokes of your pen and detailing the moments.
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Date: 9/8/2020 11:27:00 AM
Rummaging through memorabilia can bring back sentiments of the past. Stunning poem.
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Date: 9/8/2020 8:50:00 AM
Funny how episodes in your life play back in your mind like a sideshow. Well written Nette. Greetings from Turkey Tom
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