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                    Wedding Memorabilia

Framed moments zoom, a night of review as vignettes glide on this mindscape like scrapbook leaves brushed in violet before moonlight’s pause. Every motion, every image bursts into tints of life- stages. Embers within her flash: a peachy tot screaming for jelly ; while eighth birthday flops, escaping from the party clown— How the voices of light enter the marrow and gracefully recite the stories and poems from parental death, aborted friendships to love’s glossed flame. The air inside her becomes quiet, awake... she inhales dusky breath when musings fall like twigs on the bosom. Yet, the air’s warmth hugs her shadow, moistening brambles of thought...refreshed. ~ I lay on a bed filled with imaginings, precious flashbacks walking me back to time’s sentiments ...all cuddled in a day. ------------- William Kekaula’s All In A Day Contest 9/7/2020

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Date: 9/20/2020 1:35:00 AM
Wow. Really wow. I feel you wrote the feelings I wanted to express. Only yours is art. Can I ask if you work at your poems? Really congratulations. I read poetry all day every day classics and amateur and you took my breath away. The standard here at poetry soup is already outstanding
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Nette :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2020 8:40:00 PM
Choice words appropriates this wondrous entry of yours, Nette, exquisite expressions articulated, 'twas a truly mesmerizing delivery! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
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Date: 9/16/2020 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
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Date: 9/10/2020 12:47:00 AM
A great way to reminisce memories, Nette:)
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Date: 9/9/2020 9:56:00 AM
You recalled a great deal my dear friend - going through letters, photos or maybe poems, brings back unforgettable memories. You are so right - your poem is magnifique! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/8/2020 9:19:00 PM
what a thoughtfully lucid tapestry of recollection...I hope you are doing well Nette :)
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Date: 9/8/2020 7:25:00 PM
You seem pensive in this write, taking small strokes of your pen and detailing the moments.
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Date: 9/8/2020 11:27:00 AM
Rummaging through memorabilia can bring back sentiments of the past. Stunning poem.
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Date: 9/8/2020 10:42:00 AM
I love the way "every image bursts into tints of life." Just look at all the emotions you experienced in just one day. Excellent writing, Nette. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/8/2020 8:50:00 AM
Funny how episodes in your life play back in your mind like a sideshow. Well written Nette. Greetings from Turkey Tom
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