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All In a Day

I waited all year for cotton candy day, and my excitement had been growing; oh, now the carnival fair was here, with the rides and games and shows. ~ And those special smells. ~ We lived close to the fair grounds. and walked, although I skipped along; I could hear the high shrills and noise, and I was beside myself with glee. ~ This is a happy memory. ~ We entered the gates with tickets, and followed the crowds past tents; sometimes, Mom stopped to look, but, I pulled her arm, "lets go." ~The cotton candy was lovely. ~ Mom wanted me to go on rides, but I was content to sit on the grass; and eat my huge pink cotton candy. a news photographer snapped my picture. ~ The caption read, "tot enjoys fair." ~ All day we wandered the fair grounds, playing bingo- I loved the Merry-Go-Round; Mom loved the Swings, we were so tired, but, I convinced Mom that I needed or die. ~ A cotton candy to take home. ~ ____________________________ September 7, 2020 Poetry/Narrative/All In A Day Copyright Protected, ID 20-1284-071-03 All Right Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, All In A Day sponsor, William Kekaula First Place
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I am with you, the pink cotton candy was the best. Never took any home. A wonderful write and picture. Enjoy your win..............
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Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2020 8:55:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, we have no fairs in my city anymore like the ones of my childhood, which I find so sad _Constance
Date: 9/17/2020 5:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Constance :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2020 8:20:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 9/16/2020 8:51:00 PM
A pleasurable and entertaining submission, Constance, reading it made my confining day less noticeable, my thanks indeed ! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
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Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2020 8:21:00 AM
William, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my great placement, honored _Constance
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