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All I Need

All I need Is God All I want Is God All else is a meaningless Exercise in frivolity For you can only Leave this world With what you came in with Minimalism Poetry Contest Sponsored by : Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer 12/18/18

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2018 6:15:00 PM

Nicely done. A great spiritual message.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/21/2018 6:35:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/21/2018 5:48:00 AM

Back with well deserved congrats, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2018 6:21:00 PM

Yes. You're right. All our endeavors pale, as we stand naked, exposed, before the Lord. Well-done, Timothy. Season's best, Gershon

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/20/2018 6:40:00 PM

Well spoken Gershon, the best to you and yours this holiday season

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 12/20/2018 4:35:00 PM

Congratulations, Timothy. I had a LOL at your comment below.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/20/2018 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Miss CHD! :)

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/19/2018 7:41:00 PM

Not a wasted word. No more needed. Complete. Very nice. Best of luck in the contest.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/20/2018 8:04:00 PM

Thanks PS

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/20/2018 4:56:00 PM

back with congratulations!!!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/19/2018 9:37:00 PM

Thank you P.S.!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/19/2018 5:07:00 AM

Well said Timothy, those super rich could do so much to help the less fortunate and I get satisfaction knowing that not one penny will they take with them. Hope you have a lovely christmas. Tom.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/19/2018 12:54:00 PM

You are right Tom. Same Christmas wishes to you and yours.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/18/2018 11:14:00 PM

That's a winner for sure, Timothy.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/21/2018 5:48:00 AM

Isn't that the truth... LOL

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/18/2018 11:54:00 PM

You never know Miss Line. Poems I thought were sure winners never placed and ones I thought were very weak won. Thank you for the vote of confidence .