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All I Need

All I need
Is God
All I want
Is God
All else is a meaningless
Exercise in frivolity
For you can only
Leave this world
With what you came in with

Minimalism Poetry Contest
Sponsored by : Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
12/18/18

Copyright © Timothy Mcguire | Year Posted 2018

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/21/2018 6:15:00 PM Nicely done. A great spiritual message. Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/21/2018 6:35:00 PM Thank you Andrea

Line Gauthier Date: 12/21/2018 5:48:00 AM Back with well deserved congrats, Timothy. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/20/2018 6:21:00 PM Yes. You're right. All our endeavors pale, as we stand naked, exposed, before the Lord. Well-done, Timothy. Season's best, Gershon Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/20/2018 6:40:00 PM Well spoken Gershon, the best to you and yours this holiday season

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Date: 12/20/2018 4:35:00 PM Congratulations, Timothy. I had a LOL at your comment below. Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/20/2018 5:36:00 PM Thank you Miss CHD! :)

P.S. Awtry Date: 12/19/2018 7:41:00 PM Not a wasted word. No more needed. Complete. Very nice. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/20/2018 8:04:00 PM Thanks PS P.S. Awtry Date: 12/20/2018 4:56:00 PM back with congratulations!!! Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/19/2018 9:37:00 PM Thank you P.S.!

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/19/2018 5:07:00 AM Well said Timothy, those super rich could do so much to help the less fortunate and I get satisfaction knowing that not one penny will they take with them. Hope you have a lovely christmas. Tom. Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/19/2018 12:54:00 PM You are right Tom. Same Christmas wishes to you and yours.

Line Gauthier Date: 12/18/2018 11:14:00 PM That's a winner for sure, Timothy. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/21/2018 5:48:00 AM Isn't that the truth... LOL Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/18/2018 11:54:00 PM You never know Miss Line. Poems I thought were sure winners never placed and ones I thought were very weak won. Thank you for the vote of confidence .