Timothy Mcguire Poet Free verse

All I Need

All I need
Is God
All I want
Is God
All else is a meaningless
Exercise in frivolity
For you can only
Leave this world
With what you came in with

Minimalism Poetry Contest
Sponsored by : Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
12/18/18

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Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2018 at 6:15 PM Nicely done. A great spiritual message. Timothy Mcguire December 21, 2018 at 6:35 PM Thank you Andrea

Line Gauthier December 21, 2018 at 5:48 AM Back with well deserved congrats, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf December 20, 2018 at 6:21 PM Yes. You're right. All our endeavors pale, as we stand naked, exposed, before the Lord. Well-done, Timothy. Season's best, Gershon Timothy Mcguire December 20, 2018 at 6:40 PM Well spoken Gershon, the best to you and yours this holiday season

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer December 20, 2018 at 4:35 PM Congratulations, Timothy. I had a LOL at your comment below. Timothy Mcguire December 20, 2018 at 5:36 PM Thank you Miss CHD! :)

P.S. Awtry December 19, 2018 at 7:41 PM Not a wasted word. No more needed. Complete. Very nice. Best of luck in the contest. Timothy Mcguire December 20, 2018 at 8:04 PM Thanks PS P.S. Awtry December 20, 2018 at 4:56 PM back with congratulations!!! Timothy Mcguire December 19, 2018 at 9:37 PM Thank you P.S.!

Tom Cunningham December 19, 2018 at 5:07 AM Well said Timothy, those super rich could do so much to help the less fortunate and I get satisfaction knowing that not one penny will they take with them. Hope you have a lovely christmas. Tom. Timothy Mcguire December 19, 2018 at 12:54 PM You are right Tom. Same Christmas wishes to you and yours.

Line Gauthier December 18, 2018 at 11:14 PM That's a winner for sure, Timothy. Line Gauthier December 21, 2018 at 5:48 AM Isn't that the truth... LOL Timothy Mcguire December 18, 2018 at 11:54 PM You never know Miss Line. Poems I thought were sure winners never placed and ones I thought were very weak won. Thank you for the vote of confidence .