All I Ask of You

I seek the immortality that breathes within you, the forbidden language spoken only by the
Ancient ones!

I seek the essence that pours from your lips, that liquid awash from passions kiss!

I damn my own soul in payment for the caress of your own, I cast aside morality and
virtue, to Just once touch your fire, to dance in the flame that is you!

Torture holds no fear to me, torment an ally that allows me to finally feel something,
denied in This mortal realm!

My tears are not the water of weakness, they flow from the rivers of belief, I embrace the
salt in My wounds!

If love hurts, Jealousy burns and possession repels then feed me, I do not belong to the
land of the pure!

I know the truth and it was born of pain, give to me your vengeance, that I may finally
arise from The ashes!

Supplicant I kneel before you, set free this wind that my fire may grow!

This is all I ask of you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/29/2009 11:15:00 AM
Awesome write this!! I'm still re-reading and savoring ... smile ... wonderful write, Julie and a well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, GB Always Tyesha
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:12:00 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations Julie on this deep write, "All I Ask Of You" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:37:00 AM
This is a passionate piece. Powerful words, very thought provoking. Congratulations on being featured and from the comments below I see this is not the first time for this write. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured! Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured once again this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/27/2008 9:48:00 AM
Julie - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/23/2008 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations Julie on this excellent piece being featured. This touches on life and the need for that life to be lived. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 12/22/2008 9:26:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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Date: 12/21/2008 7:13:00 PM
Julie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 5:05:00 PM
Congrats on being featured
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Date: 12/21/2008 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/21/2008 2:29:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 11/5/2008 4:06:00 PM
very beautiful and inspiring this could be talent we see. well the future may tell. jhl
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