All Gold

Wriggling tiny worms, A bucket full of green waste, All turned into gold. Dated: 23/04/2015

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Susan Gentry

Date: 1/16/2016 3:13:00 PM

Brilliant! Each haiku you write gets better and better, I think. You definitely are good at it.

Constance La France

Date: 4/24/2015 4:13:00 PM

Archana, us city folk are delicate when it comes to worms but composting is a good thing, I never knew the composte turned gold, you sure got me attention so I rated this haiku 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Jacqueline

Archana Garg
Date: 4/26/2015 11:01:00 AM

Thanks dear.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/24/2015 4:09:00 PM

Wonderful write, a 7, Archana, I understood, I have been around a couple of farmers. Blessing Eve

Archana Garg
Date: 4/26/2015 10:59:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and appreciating.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2015 8:05:00 PM

Is it silk worm or something?

Archana Garg
Date: 4/24/2015 11:00:00 AM

Hehe !! Recently I started composting. And those silly earthworms turned all my kitchen waste into beautiful compost ( I call it gold). I was so excited that this Haiku oozed out.