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All Future Brides Beware

swirling stars of snow amidst lightning spikes electricity of stark midnight strikes a wicked wind, silk toss’d canopy bed pale Cassidy resurrect’d from dead dress’d in thick black, mourners wailing in hall, soon see the shrieking ghost coming through wall wraith sights the witch who killed her in his arms ‘geist snatches wench-face, recalcitrant to harm 10/25/2020 Contest: 8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:06:00 PM
Great story Kim. Wonderful, creative take on the theme! Think I won't mess with those "Cassidy's" High fives and kudos on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2020 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! Glad you liked it!
Date: 11/6/2020 11:30:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest ... well done, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 11:58:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/6/2020 10:41:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/5/2020 1:44:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative and spooky tale!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 10/29/2020 4:21:00 AM
This is way past spooky, Kim. Ghoulish, gory, horrifying, and perfect for Halloween week!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 10/25/2020 2:32:00 PM
Lots of great spooky images!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 10/25/2020 11:50:00 AM
Hello Kim, yes future brides beware. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/27/2020 10:20:00 AM
Hello Kim, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 12:27:00 PM
LOL...thanks, dear lady!
Date: 10/25/2020 9:08:00 AM
Lovely take for Halloween. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 10/25/2020 6:28:00 AM
Wow... spooky for sure :) God bless you with many more wonderful writes
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 10/25/2020 6:00:00 AM
Damn... What a dark and haunting poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thanks, Silent!

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