Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

All Future Brides Beware

swirling stars of snow amidst lightning spikes
                       electricity of stark midnight strikes

                     a wicked wind, silk toss’d canopy bed
                          pale Cassidy resurrect’d from dead

      dress’d in thick black, mourners wailing in hall,
 soon see the shrieking ghost coming through wall

  wraith sights the witch who killed her in his arms
    ‘geist snatches wench-face, recalcitrant to harm




10/25/2020
Contest: 8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Sam Kauffman November 11, 2020 at 12:06 PM Great story Kim. Wonderful, creative take on the theme! Think I won't mess with those "Cassidy's" High fives and kudos on your win! Kim Rodrigues November 11, 2020 at 5:43 PM Thank you, Sam! Glad you liked it!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 11:30 AM - Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest ... well done, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2020 at 11:58 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Constance La France November 6, 2020 at 10:41 AM Kim, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2020 at 11:57 AM Thank you, my friend!

Tania Kitchin November 5, 2020 at 1:44 PM Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative and spooky tale! Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2020 at 7:25 PM Thank you, Tania!

Caren Krutsinger October 29, 2020 at 4:21 AM This is way past spooky, Kim. Ghoulish, gory, horrifying, and perfect for Halloween week! Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2020 at 5:31 AM Thank you, my friend!

John Watt October 25, 2020 at 2:32 PM Lots of great spooky images! Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 3:19 PM Thank you, John!

Darlene De Beaulieu October 25, 2020 at 11:50 AM Hello Kim, yes future brides beware. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 27, 2020 at 10:20 AM Hello Kim, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 12:27 PM LOL...thanks, dear lady!

Victor Buhagiar October 25, 2020 at 9:08 AM Lovely take for Halloween. ~~ Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 12:27 PM Thank you, Victor!

Regina Mcintosh October 25, 2020 at 6:28 AM Wow... spooky for sure :) God bless you with many more wonderful writes Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 12:28 PM Thank you, sweet lady!

Silent One October 25, 2020 at 6:00 AM Damn... What a dark and haunting poem! Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 12:28 PM Thanks, Silent!