All Dressed In White

His eyes touched me in a million ways his desire the sum of all my days he was rubbed velvet between fingers in a blind women's world, a fantastic singer truth be told I wanted him to touch that part of me that hurt so much he gently placed me on a bed of roses then turned me over for a hundred poses deflowering innocence he set a shy girl free reaching to arousal like a tumbling bumblebee his eyes danced in the firelight that night as he seized me, all dressed in white honeymoon lovers at the wake of brawn flushed by the moon they loved, until dawn
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Michael Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 5:43 PM
Wow...this was good... REAL GOOD
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, thi is very romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
Theraven Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Mystic Rose Rose, There's magic in just a touch. And also in a Sonnet dressed in white. Like the shy girl's 'tumbling bumblebee'., a prismatic poem in passion. -Richard
Hankins Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:35 AM
This is a beautiful piece of work, Mystic Rose Rose. Would make a lovely addition to any Valentine's card, too. It is warmly sensual without being overly erotic. Nice job!
Pandit Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 6:15 AM
This is hot my friend! Beautifully romantic write, Vienna.
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